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Winter Aquamarine
2008-07-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseThe way you write is so good! This story really has a lot of potential, it's sad that it was only a one shot.

Please, please write a blurb? =3 *puppy dog eyes*
JenEvan
2008-06-10
ch 1,
abuseExciting,cute,romantic ^_^ And the expression by Freidi is just amusing ^^
"Oh shut up, wench. He may be a possibly evil damned soul of a fallen knight, but he's one hell of a good kisser, and he lanced Eustine Verly. What have YOU done for me lately?"
To her cat, at that!
Am still hopeful that you will consider writing a sequel ^^ Freidi is just plain cute with Klaus ^^
Ashes Kittyhawk
2006-12-22
ch 1,
abuseI want a blurb!

*it's cute!*
Anonymoussi
2006-08-08
ch 1,
abuseOMG add blurb pleease. >>
Hilarious. Second time I read this, gets better and better each time, as with all your works. ^^ I love this line.
"He may be a possibly evil damned soul of a fallen knight, but he's one hell of a good kisser, and he lanced Eustine Verly. What have YOU done for me lately?"
Especially the bit directed to the cat. Abysmal is just way sexy. And the last line, "I didn't have to wait for long." That just screams MINI-SEQUEL PLAX! xD Go Freidi. Write more, kthxbai ;)!
Tela
2006-04-08
ch 1,
abuseO_O Add blurb!

You know, I have a girl x monster guy in the works too. Fun to write! Only it's Dark Lord :D
GAHAHA! Oh GH intrigues me...

Neat story here. I would like more though. Lol, meh, I can wish can't I? Your writing is so spiffy
Cr0sX
2006-03-28
ch 1,
abusecoolstory!
Cezaria
2006-03-20
ch 1,
abuseIt was sweet, so sweet x3 Monsterxhuman is also a pairing that I like. Abysmal Knights seems to show up in fics a lot nowadays :D
I saw a few spelling errors but no biggie
I won't bug you to continue with it, I think it's fine as it is, but I wouldn't mind another chappie.

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Sal (Alkion)
hopelessmine
2006-03-19
ch 1,
abuseZOMFGZ! I WANT A 'BLURB'! -tries to review like crazy, but finds out that she can only do ONE PER CHAPTER!- asghdsajgdklag;!

i love your story like crazycrazyCRAZY! ashdgklajdsg;! and your characters are THAT HIGH?! -looks sadly at her level 11 one- darnnit. T-T

blurb is the new pink! -beams-

-hopelessmine!!
Mikasu
2006-03-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseOmigosh I wanna know what happens in the next ride! Please add another blurb! PWEASE! T_T I begg you!
Paperdoll
2006-03-17
ch 1, anon.
abuse/omg! thats a nice ficlet xD! more please /heh .. what RO server do you play ?

wonder if you could make another one for the next ride ! you're killing me here with that ending TT o TT''
babee-angel
2006-03-16
ch 1,
abuseIt's good to know that you're still writing
I was waiting for a new update for our other chars

hum..another ride eh? heehee
wonder what could happen next /gg
you never did describe how the wizzy looks like
I just know she has glasses
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