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blackraven1412BR
2008-08-03
ch 3,
abuselooks interesting hope you update soon...
Harry Draco Malfoy
2007-08-22
ch 3,
abuseWhere's chapter 4? I been waiting or months...

K: Yes, where is the next chapter...? #
Shu: next chapter *sniff* *sniff*...WAH!
Ryu: Next chapter na no da!
InuyashanKagomerlovers
2007-06-22
ch 3,
abusewow... A really good retelling of the story...
So, how is Shuichi gonna meet Yuki?
Update soon, I can't wait!
spirtually-lunar
2007-06-04
ch 3,
abuseloved it
cheza'flower'silver'wolf
2006-10-24
ch 3,
abusei love your story its so good

i hope you'll update soon

because its a very good story

so update soon, ne? ^_^

I CANT WAIT!
yuki ayamezuki
2006-06-29
ch 3,
abuseHeh! K how dare you make our dear lil' shu-chan cry!! *hollering*
i'm telling Judy(K's wife) about this! I hope she points your magnum at YOU!!
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lol...^-^

i really love the plot! it make shuichi sounds magical...somehow scenes of tatics flowed in my mind while reading this. Anyway, i really love it! Update soon okay?
yuki ayamezuki
2006-06-29
ch 2,
abuseBy the way i need to tell you something.

you actually spelt Touma's names wrongly, It's Seguchi Touma or Tohma.
anyway both touma and tohma are okay, but is you wanna follow romanji, it's Touma.

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wow's Shu's singing. Must be magical with his voice ^-^...

* on to the next chapter...*
yuki ayamezuki
2006-06-29
ch 1,
abuseI love the first chapter!! *screams*
when Ryu meant that Kuma chan is not alright, is he squashed?*terrified look on face*

AH...KUMA ChAN daiJyobu ka?

nee, by the way Noriko's full name is Ukai Noriko!

*on to the next chapter*
Sutzina Zion
2006-06-20
ch 3,
abuseLol your chapter was kinda short, but I like it. Your story is cute and it even has some suspense in it. I can't wait to see what kinda powers Shu has. And in case no one told you yet, Noriko's last name is Ukai.
thuyhy-thuyhy
2006-06-19
ch 3,
abuseawa , I like this story , too LOL ^O^
DarkMetalAngel of Destructi...
2006-06-19
ch 3,
abuseinteresting story. hope to read more from you soon. l8r
sendoh11
2006-06-19
ch 3,
abuseshuichi cries too easily. but is k a pervert? what if shuichi was really a girl and he touch his chest? god, i don't even wanna think what would happen to him.
Lastaras
2006-06-18
ch 2,
abuseYatta! You updated!

Long time no read ^^'

Anywho, yeah... it was short, but sometimes that happens, I would know...

But, yeah, i hop you update again soon, I really do like this idea!

Ja!

Lastaras
cheza'flower'silver'wolf
2006-06-15
ch 2,
abusei hope u update soon

i really like ur story

its the best story i have read

so please update soon
sendoh11
2006-03-19
ch 2,
abusethis is cute. i don't know why but i was smiling while reading this chapter. XD
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