its not that bad..
though i am a bit dissapointed..
please update soon!

It's a great story, I really like it!! One thing though, when ou put in a Jap sentence or word, please put the translation after it or in brackets, not that I don't understand Japanese, but some people do not. IT's a really great story, please continue!!

-Saph

Man, I bearly have an imagination (pouts) True I gree it was shorter, but short chapters better thn no update at all ^^
Hope things ork out with your muses ^^;;

... i dunno what to say ...
still great story even if you did kinda end it bluntly ^^;;

Short but sweet. Go to Naruto and leave us hanging.

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!

AH! 'NOTHER LANGUAGE!! ME ESH CONFUZZLED! *head explodes*

Oh, wait, you got the translation at the bottom. Oh, well that's nice. |3

Do you speak Japanese or something?

wow, just wow. good story. love it so far

So many Japanese words! @_@ Man, I need to learn Japanese. It's kinda hard to understand what they're saying, even with the notes at the bottom of the chapter. I think you skipped some words or maybe their big english words and I just don't know what they mean. Try not using so many Japanese phrases in your story, yeah I understand you're trying to learn Japanese but not everyone knows it, and it's annoying scrolling down every few seconds to look up a phrase.

This wasn't one of your better chapters, mainly because it was short and the Japanese words made it hard to understand. And don't rush through the chapter! It's better for it to be late than rushed through. If you need longer than a month, than take longer than a month! I don't think anyone is going to kill you for that as long as the chapter is intersting and makes sense. You seemed rushed in this chapter. Please, don't kill yourself trying to update your stories, your personal life, school, and/or work are are more important so don't be freaking out if that gets in the way.

Well, here's osme constructive critism for you. I hope you take this advice and relax. Writing fanfiction is for pleasure, it's not something you have to do. Please keep that in mind. Well until the next update, have fun!

K.K

Despite their problems Bakura and Ryou can be so cute when they're alone. Hope their plan works ^^

wow ^^ great story so far! please update soon!

ok i know you have the next chapter up but i just had to comment on this one...
1) omg thats so weird coz my french teacher is called ms spratt ^^ hehe
2) that was so sad :( i was bawlin my eyes out after readin thin chapter... plus the school bits made me laugh ^^

Good chapter. I feel so bad for them. I hope they are okay in the 'System'.

OH! Sunny-kun likes! Keep going, keep going, I'm ready!

There where a few errors, not to many though. I like it. Especially the length of the story. Please update soon.