I like the tone of this fic: dreamy, almost meditative. Thanks for sharing.

Are you going to finish this story? I really like it. Please finish it.

.. wonderful.

Very creative and very good!

Now that was a good fanfic! I have very strange often completely contrasting moods and I just happened to be in the perfect mindset for this fic so thank you very much you've just made me very happy ;) and perhaps doubly so because it's always nice to find a fellow Kiwi. Anyways hope your having a good day to.
Ta
x CH

really amazing story mate. the only thing i can ask for is more...
You could have used this theme/storyline very easily for a full length fic instead of this short but amazing story.
I sure hope you can expand this into a detailed story.

Good Luck

cool story. I like it!

Wow! This was fabulous! Now I'm off to see what else you've written.

Good story

I very much enjoyed this story. I do have one question though. When Harry stated that he was taking the heart of the castle, did he mean that the consiousness of the castle would depart or that Dumbledore would never have the loyalty of the castle again?

So impressive.
And of course there is ALWAYS Hope... *smile*

Pure Genius.

A true masterpiece.

10/10

Wow. Phenomenal story. I just discovered it in DLP's library, and I have to say that was one of the best cunning!Harry stories I've ever read.

I have to admit I was ever-so-slightly disappointed in the third act, as we didn't get an explanation for Harry's suddenly godlike powers. Snape's acceptance of Harry as a leader likewise seemed a bit sudden.

Nevertheless, the story as a whole is brilliant. The first chapter achieves the characterization of Harry that all indy!Harry fics seek and so few find. Well done.

Interesting. Very open ended but it seems to need to be that way.
I like the chapter dedicated to one viewpoint. Also an intersting spin on the powerful!Harry kills Voldemort and breaks free of manipulative!Dumbledore.
NIce piece.

Wonderful story! There are too few, good stories out there that have Harry & Minerva bonding.