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everyday-snowangel 2008-06-12 ch 5,	abuseouh! this was good! i enjoyed it a lot!! ^^
ShikaRocks 2008-04-22 ch 5,	abuseGod. How do you do it? Where did you get this plot idea? I mean, seriously. I was so scared from basically the first half of the first chapter that it wasn't going to end well. But, man. I loved this. And now, this is officially my favorite Kingdom Hearts pairing. lol. Fantastic job. You had a very consistent style, and great grammar and spelling and tense was spot on. Man. You are really amazing. Would it be alright if I stole part of this plot for a manga/story I'm writing? It's perfect for my characters. Again, I love it. You rock. Period.
ShikaRocks 2008-04-22 ch 4,	abuseAmazing. Completely amazing. I must admitt that I have been extremely on edge these past couple days as I've sat down and the computer and read a couple hundred words and then had to lay down (my neck is like, broken) and now I can't even explain what I'm feeling. You are terrifyingly talented. The way you write astounds me. And I love Roxas' vocabulary. haha. I look forward to the next chapter. Once I can sit up long enough to click that little button...
ShikaRocks 2008-04-17 ch 3,	abuseOnce again, I love it. I don't want to sound lame, but you have such an incredible way with words. There is never a lagging passage in the plot line. Everything works perfectly and nothing feels rushed. Hm. Talent. Lots and lots of talent. -ShikaRocks-
ShikaRocks 2008-04-17 ch 2,	abuseDefinitely a favorite. I love the continuous flow of thought and the way Roxas is always contradicting himself. Your humor is fantastic. I love the ring reference. Very nice. And I love the way you portray Axel and how they became friends. Awesome. Oh, and I would love to read more right now, but I probably can't. No time. Maybe in an hour or so...or 5 minutes. It all depends. I really do want to read it though. I simply MUST know what happens. -ShikaRocks-
ShikaRocks 2008-04-17 ch 1,	abuseI am definitely liking this story and this pairing. Man, I didn't think it was possible for me to NOT like Sora, but it's actually happened. He seems like a total douche. (is that how you spell that word?) I love your style (I said that in another review, right?) and can't wait till I click the little arrow so that chapter 2 will show up. Yay! I hope it works out for Roxas. He IS my favorite character. -ShikaRocks-
sketched out love 2008-04-11 ch 5,	abuseI'm not sure if you still get on this account much, considering the publish dates of some of your stories. But... wow. I absolutely adored this story with my being. I've always been a huge shipper of Roxiri, but this story just boost my love for the couple 1,0 x more. Really, I love your writing style. It's unique and I haven't seen that style around too often. I loved the way you made Roxas and Kairi such a beautiful angsty couple. You do much justice to them both. This is definitely my favorite Roxiri out there, no doubt. Excellent.
Sleets 2008-02-08 ch 5,	abuse:D I'm not normally a fan of KH fanfics, and definitely not much of a Roxiri one, but you totally changed my mindset! I loved the way you develop Roxas' character as a clumsy boy who spaces out a little too much. His clumsiness adds on perfectly! You've made him sound so witty and it makes me laugh even when I'm not supposed to. Forever a fav!
Sleets 2008-02-08 ch 3,	abuseYou potray their feelings so well :D I love the style!
broken0dream 2007-08-25 ch 5,	abuseAw. This story was so sweet. The relationship between Kairi and Roxas was well played out. Especialy how strange Roxas felt whenever he was near her. It closed up neatly, which is why it has to be one of the best Roxiri stories I've read. You did a great job writting this which is why I love it.
Jennie 2007-08-24 ch 5, anon.	abuseAhimigawd I'm in love with this story. xDD May I take a moment of you're time to say you're an AMAZING author? Well I already did so ha! d: I also love your Roxiri fan fic, A Walk In Andante! :D Keep writing, hmmkay?
Maia<3 ^^ 2007-04-20 ch 3, anon.	abuseAw... How sweet! ^^ Love Maia (L)
tragic serenade 2007-04-12 ch 5,	abuseThat was beautiful. Simply amazingly beautiful. It brought a smile to my face. :] You have an amazing talent. I would like to write like you someday :] It will be added to my Favorites. ♥ x Taylor.
Danko Kaji 2007-03-20 ch 5,	abuseThis story... was BEAUTIFUL! -cries- I LOVED THIS STORY! I loved how you potrayed Roxas in first-person and I loved how you tied up Sora connecting with Roxas and their relationships with Namine and Kairi, and how everyone reacted in the last chapter, and, and, and... -breathless- I just love it. I love the story. You, my fine friend, are an arteest of writing! Roxas and Kairi are not a pair I'm crazy about, but after this, I think I've changed my mind. Let's just say I'm a sucker for cross-gendered, best friend love. It's all the more interesting.
CrepuscularXDelight 2007-03-20 ch 5,	abuseThis was so cute! I think you should have explained about that cherry folder or whatever it was that Roxas found in Sora's room. Also I wanted to hear more about Sora's reaction to Kairi and Roxas' hook up. Thats just my opinion though. Well, I really love this story like, super bad(if that makes sense)! I want to read your other stories, because this one was good! -m

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