 Iku 2009-10-27 . chapter 11We all know what happened to Zuko in the Nick-Plot and I've got to say that it must of suck royally for the prince because he doesn't have any friends. This chapter with Katara's support made it seem more bearable for a person who just got scarred by their very own parent in public. ~Touching T__T |
 midnightwaters 2009-10-20 . chapter 22Wow this story was absolutely stunning to read. Too bad you decided not to continue it... |
 marora 2009-10-13 . chapter 22This entire story is absolutely gorgeous; I think what really makes it special is that it's more a series of snippets than a continuing time line. |
 marora 2009-10-13 . chapter 16This is hilarious! I absolutely love it, especially the implacations behind it. But then again, this whole series is awesome. |
 Tocharian 2009-09-14 . chapter 21So, to save the world she destroyed her best friend. Maybe not literally but I can't help think that this destruction of trust is worse that what his father did to him. Last time he at least had her to bully him out of his misery. I guess I'm wondering why she drugged everyone except Zuko & why was Aang there? Why did she decided to go with Aang to save the world as opposed to letting him fly off with Sokka? |
 Lane 2009-09-04 . chapter 20 Beautiful story! I have been waiting for that kiss :D
And: I'm not sure if this will amount to anything, but another fanfic, Eclipsed by SecretBox, seems to contain several modified excerpts from this chapter. Just, so you know. |
 xyzisme 2009-09-01 . chapter 21In the hope that you continue :) |
 xyzisme 2009-09-01 . chapter 12Instead of taking on the onerous task to continue this series through all of the first, second and third seasons, why don't you go for snippets of inspiration that strike you from the seasons? I'd love to see how this fits in with canon, and how it alters the characters slightly, and I know you can do it. Probably one or two drabbles from each episode would do it :) |
 -delicate.desires 2009-08-31 . chapter 22What a wonderful story! It was absolutely amazing to read. I teared up in some parts, too, and although the ending was so sad, I enjoyed reading this a lot! I like the different 'styles' you used for certain chapters- like the numbered list, or a drabble-like chapter. (: |
 Infinite101 2009-08-03 . chapter 22Wow this fic was a delight to read
It's wonderfully written i love how you had Katara and iroh's relationship develop at the beginning of the fic, and how Zuko and Katara's has too
i hope you write a sequel - it can't end there!
Keep up the great work =] |
 TheGreenElephant911 2009-07-15 . chapter 22This story was awesome. I silently screamed at the computer (only a squeak came out) when I read the ending of this... I loved how it was written. |
 A Mistake 2009-07-13 . chapter 15"A wizard's staff has a knob on the end,
a knob on the end,
a knob on the end"
Somehow a fullblown chorus of (drunk) Unseen University wizards automatically parrot that funky song back at me when I'm reading this in the middle of the night. Very nice placement though.
I like the flowing narrative so far and I'll be damned if I stopped reading now...
just...a couple...more...chapters...
(Can't stop the addict in me, really) |
 NiminariAmriath 2009-07-12 . chapter 22good...liked her yelling at him after the fight...intermission makes me hope for a sequel...and as dickenson says "and sore would be the storm that could abash the little bird that kept so many warm" perhaps cheesy but hey i did it from memory so that has to count for something...so...sequel? |
 mak0-ch1 2009-06-24 . chapter 150.0 Pray tell, where is the Terry Pratchett reference?
Is it just the profious drinking bit, or more than that? |
 helloheart 2009-06-11 . chapter 21An amazing fanfic. The pace of their relationship was just perfect, and I adore the perspectives of Katara, Zuko, and Iroh. Your descriptions are just right; not too draggy, but not too short. I loved it. c: |