 LovingYouAtFirstSight 2/12/11 . chapter 1That was a really cute story. I loved the last line it really summed up the story well. Well done. |
 Crystalwhisper 2/8/11 . chapter 1Wow, incredible, awesome, fantastic! Emotion, description and philosphy... You've got it all skilfully crystallizedin a single story. I love your writing style and the way the battle is written to show Neville being inspired by the Hufflepuff's courage and fearlessness. I also reflected Hufflepuff's beauty, and how they can actually sacrifice for each other. Lovely story that is filled with courage, friendship and romance, leaving traces of Hermione's love for Ron... Very sweet! :) |
 Inkfire 1/31/11 . chapter 1I really loved this! First, you made the intensity, terror and breathlessness of battle brilliantly. I loved the tiny flash-backs in italics - they gave a whole other dimension to the fic by showing true insight in the characters' sense of togetherness. The part about Harry not making much sense was very striking and heart-breaking, as was Hermione's behaviour with Ron. I love how you showed the gap between the quiet, shy Hufflepuffs Neville once knew, and the people now fighting in battle, and the way he suddenly realized his own role in the whole thing was really well handled. Great job! |
 Love From A Muggle 1/27/11 . chapter 1I loved this! I liked how you wrote Neville. How he wanted to be like the Hufflepuffs. I liked how you described the battle. I think you should write more Battle stories. This was really great! |
 breeutiful 1/8/10 . chapter 1I really like this.
I loved the flashback to Hermione practically ordering Ron not to get killed. And I also like how - despite being in a war - the Hufflepuffs still manage to say their thanks. :D |
 digigirl02 8/18/08 . chapter 1Great, I love Neville, and enjoy how you shown the brave and loyal side of the Hufflepuffs. |
 clap your hands say claire 3/28/06 . chapter 1That was hilarious. Simply hilarious. But good. Well written. A bit strange. But that is good. Strange is good.
Love Claire, who is a Gryffindor at heart with a Ravenclaw mind. |
 Cherenmay 3/17/06 . chapter 1that was absolutely perfect! thank you so much for even trying to take it on. i feel bad for making you try such a difficult challenge, but you pulled it off so wonderfully. i'm under the impression that you can do no wrong! marvellous. and i love the title and the ending, in fact, the ending's probably my favorite part. if the hufflepuffs can do it, so can i. perfect! and again, thank you so much! |
 Rianna Walcott 3/17/06 . chapter 1 OMG- you made me cry... I feel sick with myself...lol really good! |