OOH I LOVE THIS STORY! The modeling part is so interesting, and I love it when Hinata shows how strong and beautiful she really is! (Take that, Kin!) But I also want to see more of Neji, and his protectiveness. :3 He's such a cool character! Shino is also especially cool. It would be great to hear more of him. (Well, I would like it, but that doesn't matter.) And also, what about Sasuke and Hinata? The action!

I just feel all fuzzy inside reading this fic!

Cute, Kiba, real cute.

the only downfall to this story is that you do a lot of descriptions. a little too much. i rarely read about anyone talking. all i read about is how this and that person looks and it gets boring especially when i already know how they look. i'm actually getting really bored reading this. in my opinion i think you would get more reviews if you let the characters do more of the talking n less of the narator. how do you think movies are rated? definitely not on the narators take. so yea let the characters do a lil more talking and try to give a brief descriptions so that i can use my own imagination that's why i read to use MY imagination. that's what keeps me interested like the writer givng just enough info. so that i can at least dream a little. and that's what this story is mostly made out of: descriptions which feels like i'm reading a book on how a forest looks when it snows or when spring, summer, and fall comes and it just gets boring. fells like i'm doing an assignment for my teacher but i also got this one feeling where i want to keep reading and see if anything sparks but ima give it a rest maybe i'll feel up to it later but for right now it seems as if i'm wasting my time. sorry but this is how i feel i wasn't even going to comment but i just had to let you know because you are the first writer to taking descriptiond this far. in comparisons to writng for the teacher you would proabably get an a+ but come on it's like reading your 50 word essay to the class n me falling asleep and i think the only reason why i commented was to get a feel for typing again otherwise i wouldn't have commented if i don't like a story or if my interest isn't peeked i just move on the next. well anyways you did good the story seems somewhat realistic but you make hinata seem boogy(fake) just in case you didnt know what that word meant. it's like she changes personalities like depending on the people she meets which annoys me because people in real life do that and it bothers me so um, i hope you'll find the good in my critique and hopefully what i say is true:that you'll get more reviews if you decrease the descriptions and lengthen the conversations and if you have anything to you want to say then email me

This in my opinion is quite an original story! I wonder what went on between sasuke and orochimaru? Oh boy, is this going to have NejiSaku? *ugh* All the guys are so sexy!*squeals*

I REALLY LIKED IT, PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! )=p

God, you have all the games I positively love in here. And the show, haha. Oh the drama. *does happy dance* I love your interpretation on the Naruto gang (especially Hinata), I just love gamers. Haven't seen much of that on . Anyways, hope to read more from you again, 'cause it's the best. Adios!

P.S. Hinata kicks ass

Ka! F* yea! I thought you were on hiatus all this time. I kept you on alert just in case. Good to see that you never stopped this story. So here is my review (even though I thought I did so for an earlier chap *sweat-drop* I am so sorry). I positively love this story, as you can see from this long rant. I really hope to read some more from you soon. Gosh, this is truly a kick-ass story.

I WANT THE SAILOR MOON DVDS :D
lol. seriously. I LOVE that show.
anyway. nice chapter. and the ending narration was great!

Whoa, this is great ^-^ I read all 12 chaps all in one go, I'm too engrossed in the story to put a review in every chaps. Well, I'd still say the same line actually, they're really good and well-written. Looking forward for the next chap ^-^ More Shikamaru-kun please, I've been fangirling him lately ^o^

Awesome update! XDD! I gotta say I LOVE this chapter! Hinata is so very cool in this chapter! Dealing with Kin the way she did! XDD!

Serves her right, LOL! Please update soon!

hahaha! go hina-hime! woot woot!! f*&% u kin! damn how i hate her, n sakura, n karin! lol! thx 4 the update!

ZOMG I'm so glad I saw this! I have some questions... Apart from the SasuHina pairing, are there any other pairings too?

Also, does Hinata knows that Haku is a male?

Please update soon!

heh heh heh awesome lol
cutezey-ness-ness
awesome writting fabulous ideas!
Totally an author :D

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awesome and even tho i havnt read it all yet im lovin it :D
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