Wow, you right in such a way as to actually delve into Brin's mind...I bet that the way you wrote that is the way Brin actually thinks. You are an awesome writer. And people have recommended your fics at other sites. Keep writing, I commend your work!

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That was brutal. I kinda got a shiver. It was like really being in Brin's head. I liked the flips from her then to now. Excellant job!