I don't really understand the ending. Although Hiruma's maybe a bit OOC, but I guess it's fine. Nice fic! :)

The last sentence was a bit redundant, but overall, it was pretty nice.

Cute!

aw

NICE!! short and sweet!

It's so good!

It's like those two are meant for each other.

I LOVED it! It was an extremely good story, in itself, however, the characters weren't exactly themselves.
HOWEVER... It would make my day if you wrote another chapter!

THAT WAS AN AWESOME STORY! I MEAN THAT HAD BETTER NOT HAVE BEEN A ONE SHOT THING! IF IT WAS I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND KILL YOU 'CAUSE I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE! KEEP WRITING, YOU SURE ARE AWESOME AT IT!

it's really cute... :)
why dont you make another chappy

It's well-written, but extremely out of character on both Hiruma's and Mamori's part. Furthermore, no attempt was made to actually find information about the Blood Vampires' strategies/moves/etc, as was the original purpose of the 'date'.

the ending kinda weird if you ask me... hiruma's kind off...you know (shrugs) but it's a good fanfic. i like the way the two of them react. cute if you ask me.

continue making stories. i support you.

...Aw... That was really sweet... ^^

wah~
this fic is so silly. so totally uncharacteristic yet utterly enjoyable and delightful to read.

I like it so if... you ever come back to writing.
please do and start writing more hirumamo fics ok?
We're expecting! I am!!

I'm begging!

aww... so cute...
i just love hirumaxmamori pair! they're my favorite pair in ES21 plus senaxsuzuna... i just love this fic!!

Cool,a nice story.You made them boiling point because didn't expect to happen.)Em,I better go somewhere else,Bye...