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| pcp4202002 2008-08-18 ch 1, | abusethis was good you should write another one |
| Fear-My-Katoph-Obsession 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseHoly mother of god! Almost 20,0 words! That's amazing. I liked the story a lot! Squee for Gelphie! |
| wickedndrentrock 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abuseWow this story was.. woah! It can't be described how good this story was. That was pretty much how I wanted the book to end. lol. |
| :D 2006-07-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm glad to see another person who enjoys the thought of Glinda and Elphaba together... but I don't think that Boq was the Tin Man. Tin Man was a guy who was going to run off with a milk maid. >.> Sorry! I just get way too overly protective of the novel. And the musical. By the way, did you mean for it to ALL be bold? Just wondering. (don't kill me, please...) |
| JediKnightTalin 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI really like this story. It's very original, and it makes everything that went wrong better, so it's awesome in my book LOL There are a few things you might want to think about, tho. First, the commas are your friends LOL I noticed that there are a lot of places that should have commas but don't. Second, you might want to think about getting a beta reader to check your grammar and spelling. Sometimes the way you word things is slightly awkward. But all in all, I love this story! LOL |
| Squeaky Phantom 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abuseEXCELLENT STORY! I realy liked it. I hope to read more of your work in the near future. |
| Kelly 2006-03-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseReally delves deeply into the depths of Wicked Witch of the West's personality. Got me feeling sorry for a character I once hated. Great story! Darn now I have to go rewatch Wizard of Oz.*LOL* |
| GelphieLover 2006-03-22 ch 1, | abuseI loved it very much. Great job! |
| alias101 2006-03-22 ch 1, | abusei loved this story! i am a huge fan of gelphie and its like an addiction for me! and for this story...im thinking sequel:) please write more gelphie! |
| Killian 2006-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW. This was amazing! Great job! |
| Angela 2006-03-20 ch 1, anon. | abusenice story.. I want more.. :) |