That's depressing! D :

I've always like Hina. I'm glad to know they gave her a proper burial. : (

I wonder what it would've been like if Hiei had met his mother. Would they have run away together? Been a happy family? : (

Wow. This is such a powerful story! It's well-written, and goes into graphic detail.

I could actually picture this in my mind, seeing Hina's frozen corpse falling to her burial and... breaking.

I would like to point out that, in both the manga and the anime, Hina does have a burial site, but, since the episode in the anime version never "aired," it's difficult to know whatever happened to Hina. (Other than the fact she died, of course)

But good fic, overall. I'd give it a 5/5.

Only one problem: Hina has a grave.

Hohmahgawd creepy

lol

That was really sad. But I liked it~ ^_^

That certainly is a fitting ceramony for the koorime. I applaude you for thinking it up.

This was a beautiful fic that i hope you wouldn't mind if I added to my C2.

Yet another good one. ^_^ It was kinda short, but it was very complete; very well done (like all of your writing, of course). Congrats.

So sad, but unavoidable in a way. But it's good to see Rui doing this for her friend. And I think you did very well finding a buriel tradition befitting the Koorime. There's something about freezing the body and making it shatter that seems very...well, fitting for such a cold-hearted race, and somewhat tragic for Hina.

I liked it.

So what... their bodies turn to ice?

Very effective throughout the whole piece. I felt it quietly built up to the ending quite well. All though, personally I wouldn't have written that final sentance with a "it hit". It seems to take away from the effect just a little, but maybe it's just me.

I might have put something like "And on contact, it shattered." or "And then, it shattered." Though really, I've been advised against using conjunctions at the beginning of the sentance, too. (But who's going to stop me? -or you for that matter)

Accidental.Enlightenment

Even though she disgraced them, she still received the burial fitting to her station. Good.

What a sad ending. Her frail body shattered like glass. Short and simple, but good none the less.

...that's new...

that was a very intersting take on Hina's burial. You really helped make it be unique and intersting. THough i kinda wish it had been longer but still was good. Thank you

Hi! This was an interesting piece. I can't say it was comfortable to read, but it made sense, which is the important thing. You expressed the emotions of the moment quite well. All in all, it is a very good story. Thanks for posting it!