Could be expanded, made longer. *begs for sequel*

cute idea, but it needs a lot of work and better characterization. And parts are, well, impractical. Like Voyager sending its top 2 commanding officers in a single shuttle.

Wonderful attempt, although the storyline moves way too fast. You should try to separate different people's comments by using new paragraphs. It makes reading a great deal easier. Try to elborate and expand on your ideas, because this story has much potential... God Bless, Christy

Very nice story