I liked this a lot! Very nicely written. :)

Oh this is so delightfully delectable...

awesome! I love this one too!

What a satisfying dismissal of Lady Catherine!

i like your imagination. the ending almost seems like he's dreaming or something.

there are other stories posted about how Darcy's conversation would have gone, but I think this one meshes with the actual story and Darcy's temper better than the others. except for how Darcy seemed grovel in front of her. although he pretty much ignored her and then made her leave. that was sweet. she seemed to give in remarkably easily.

but, all in all, it was a good story. thanks for writing!

Beautiful the way you described the sunrise scene. Just beautiful. You certainly have a way with words. gah, i cant wait till mothers day! Oh it was just breath-taking.
Poor Lady C. The whole world is against her!

I love this line...

"She did not promise to deny me -- surely it cannot be a sign?"

I have read many (MANY) P&P fanfics on this site and yours is the FIRST to tell this part of JA's story from Darcy's and Lady Catherine's POV

CONGRATS!

“Damned obstinate Darcy bloodline,” Darcy, obstinate? never... lol I'm at a loss as to what she expected to the contrary...

I enjoyed the ending exceedingly!

aww I like it. I particularly like the way you've written Darcy's thought's at the end. very poetic. :)

I loved this! Very well written. This is just what i thought should have happened!