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| Dybdahl 2008-01-18 ch 16, | abuseIt's 2 am, as it for some reason usually turns into when I read your stories, and I've been doing the just one more chapter rutine for way to long. Work tomorrow is going to be a **, but I love the story. Both of them. And now I just want to curl up on the sofa and watch season 1 on DVD, and hope the price on season 3 will go down to a more...sane level sometimes soon. |
| archiev 2007-04-23 ch 16, | abuseMan! You are good. You gotta keep writing stories. Whatever you write, I'll be reading. |
| Tallera 2006-10-02 ch 16, | abuseEp! That ending scene with Six and the Twos is creepifying, but very cool. I just had to share...the way your Cylons in this fic (and other stories of yours) talk about their God, they make it sound like some kind of mainframe that they're all hard-wired into. Like a mothership sending out radio signals to its satellite units. A very cool take on the Cylon monotheistic spirituality. Kinda Matrix-y. I like it! :) Oh, and the story was neat, too. ;D A very interesting study on the concept of Cylon nature vs. human nurture, and which of those influences would be more powerful. Particularly cool to do it with Gaeta (despite the fact that he's your favorite), since one would imagine that his anal-retentiveness would lend itself to throwing in with the Cylons. An excellent character study on him. Kudos! :) |
| Vest-Button 2006-09-09 ch 16, | abuseI've been catching up with this story for a few days now, reading the chapters when I had time, and I must say that I've been blown away. I hardly ever have the patience to read chapter stories - most of them here are less than fullfilling - but this one has kept my attention. You've done an excellent job at creating suspence, a thing almost unknown in and your characterizations are extremely accurate. This story is going onto my favorites. Now I can only hope that you're another rarity on - a good author that updates regularly and frequently. Yes? Please? |
| vashsunglasses 2006-09-06 ch 16, | abuseThis was an amazing story. Your characterizations were perfect. All three of the main characters were completely real and fleshed out. |
| Mariel3 2006-09-06 ch 16, | abuseOh, wow...excellent chapter. Interesting developments, and I'm looking forward to reading how everything progresses. This is great reading. |
| Darlian 2006-08-27 ch 15, | abuseHmm... Now was that our Gaeta or another copy? |
| Darlian 2006-07-30 ch 14, | abuse“You should be more careful, Dr. Cottle,” he heard from behind. “ There’s a lot of scary things out here.” Glad at least Cottle is trying to understand Gaeta. He needs a hug! |
| Mariel3 2006-07-30 ch 14, | abuseI'm totally loving this. What you're showing in regards to Gaeta's inner struggle and Cottle's thinking...it's all great. Though I do hope Adama wouldn't put a bullet through his head without asking questions first. He didn't with others, so I can't imagine him doing it with someone he's worked with so closely. But that's me, wanting to think the best. Thanks for a great chapter! |
| Darlian 2006-07-19 ch 13, | abuse"It was finally becoming clear that he was about the only one left in the fleet who even cared about the oath. And he was a Cylon." So will Gaeta watch from a distance? Like a hunter, of sorts? This web is getting sticky... just like Battlestar. Good work, Rap! |
| Ammonite 2006-07-18 ch 13, | abuseGood job the way you worked through the logic in Gaeta's mind. |
| Darlian 2006-07-09 ch 12, | abusePoor Gaeta! They're just gonna abandon him like that... Roslin doesn't trust anyone, does she? Hmm, this could get interesting... especially if Gaeta ends up feeling like he's been betrayed by both sides. Keep it coming, Rap! |
| Darlian 2006-07-06 ch 11, | abuse"He figured his obligation to ex-President Roslin ended the second she said that she’d kill him." "The problem with being a clueless Cylon, Felix Gaeta thought as his vision slowly dimmed into blackness, was that it had all the downsides and none of the perks." I loved it when Gaeta told his "party" that he could hear them. ;P Good to see that he's not planning to murder anybody - that's still the same Gaeta we know and love, right? The analogy about the Viper crash and sensitive equipment sent a chill up my spine. Good stuff. |
| starbuck042786 2006-07-01 ch 10, | abuseAnd the secret is out! *cue dramatic music* Can't wait to see what happens to Gaeta! |
| bowedbassgirl 2006-06-19 ch 10, | abuseI haven't reviewed for a while, but I wanted to drop in and say that I'm still enjoying this story--I like how you've upped the suspense in this chapter. Can't wait to hear how Felix explains himself to Cottle and Roslin! |