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Michelle 3/7/07 . chapter 8
OMG! i want my 10 bucks back! i swear, Kurenai is like PMS-ing.

"In an incredible spurt of OOCness, Gaara, Temari, and Kankuro skipped off holding hands. " i really freaked me out. lol
Michelle 3/7/07 . chapter 7
TEEHEE i got 10 bucks D

lol! u kinda left lee out of the circle, i noticed. all he ever talks about is "youthfulness" hahahahaha - note to self, never drink while reading Leah's fanfic. i almost 1) chocked 2) spit it out and all over my moniter cause of ur funniness.

Shino – “Gaara, you are better at making sandcastles than anyone I know.”

Gaara – twitch twitch

lol!

oh and btw, ur the coolest and most hyper-ish person i've met and therefore, u make life more interesting. P.E was fun, anime club was enjoyable with u; trying to describe Kabuto and such XD(altho i could not come to the meets every week..dam u skoolwork!)

i got complimented alot on the part that i pushed Hinata off the cliff lol. Neji praised me O
Michelle 3/7/07 . chapter 5
O.O i did not know Neji and Shino were like that! XD

I wonder where i get back piece of paper...

(Okay screw wat i said about the anime club. josh chik, that son of a loser lied to me...He has a death sentence and the next time i see him, he will lose his head)
Michelle 3/6/07 . chapter 4
lol! the MTCSWYWTTSFOF device XDD

for some reason, when Kakashi said he invited some other people to watch, i thought of Orochimaru and his reaction to Sasuke in a bikini.. shudder
Michelle 3/6/07 . chapter 3
lol YAY! I'M A MATCH MAKER!

(but im jealous that u get to be paired up with Shika and Gaara! you did that on purpose!)

"((A/n – I really do run quite fast. However, that’s about all I can do…))"

ur flexable..D i wanna be flexable. it might help me have fast reflexes so i can dodge punchs and daggers and all stuff. You DO run fast. i remmeber u totally creamed the guys in P.E. Hilarious XDD
Michelle 3/6/07 . chapter 2
I FINALLY get to read this. gomen ne.. it took me a while. i suddenly had this fanfic addiction.

the "rather short" in my description caused me to slightly twitch ; arigatou! for letting me be part of ur story D makes me feel all special hehehehe.

AND THE FUN BEGINS! ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER! ( be fun if we had this kind of capture the flag during PE last year, ne? )

(OMG! i missed today after skool's "The Spirits Within" in anime club. im SO gunna ask the president to lemme borrow the CD. ugh)
Dragon of Venus 2/21/07 . chapter 14
well, I kinda did. lol, this is gettin freaky. please keep going, I love this fic! :)
Gaara's-pandachan101 9/11/06 . chapter 14
this is pervertive. i just read this whole story. weird... im glad you think gaara is hot ( i thought i was the only one)
pigs103 9/9/06 . chapter 4
wow
Aori Kenji 9/1/06 . chapter 1
very good i enjoyed it alot you have a very fresh writing style so it is cool to hear your story unfold. by the way if you want you can check out both of my NAruto stories. One is about what would happen to Naruto if he had a sharingan to rival Sasuke and the other is about what would happen if Naruto had become a missing nin after sasuke. read them and review them if you can. i will definetly keep reading yours.

cya!
o-dragon 8/19/06 . chapter 11
Omake? What the heck is that? Anyway, interesting chapter...

Olivia
o-dragon 8/19/06 . chapter 10
WELL YOU FINALLY UPDATE! But I shouldn't be the one to talk...lol. Another chapter, cool!

Olivia
Riaeth 8/19/06 . chapter 11
NO! Cliffie!

This is probably the funniest self-insert I've ever had the decency to read. I usually don't read self-insert, but this is like, wow, wierd, but cool...
o-dragon 5/24/06 . chapter 9
I logged in...when I didn't want to log in. So I must REALLY want to review for this! Ya...

Kiba's still cute though. You've got to admit that...without his hoodie. But Gaara's better by a thousand, and you can tell that from my xanga.

If I hadn't seen the episode where Lee's drunk, I never would've gotten this chapter. Thankfully I just watched it monday!

What IS dubbed anime? Is it like censored or something?

GAARA PROTECT US! Although I think I'd more likely try to fight, and then ask him to save me.

I've Never...fun game. It's more interesting than Truth or Dare in my opinion.

I've been stung by bees, but I've never eaten one.

"I’ve never kissed a girl…” -Hey Gaara...

Temari...I'm worried about you...seriously. YOu need to see a counselor?

Nejixtenten are cute. So are HinataxKiba

What IS the Henge no jutsu?

I have never drank alchohol. And my first expeireance (sp? don't care, skool's out!) is in a fanfic. That's pretty cool since I'm not drunk in real life. If that didn't make sense, don't worry about it, it sounded betta in my head.

Update soon!

Olivia

Ps. This chappie made me laugh...hard!
o-dragon 5/12/06 . chapter 8
HAHA! Sorry it took me so long to review! But at least I finally was able to!

Lee and sake! Wow...interesting. How will this turn out!

kurenai can be scary. and what's with her eyes? seriously? Does she possess the sharingan or something?

"This of course excluded Naruto, who was currently having his face dragged across the ground as he was towed by his toe by Gaara’s sand." -this made me laugh. I can just see this happening.

Temari and Kankurou OOC. That's a scary thought. Especially with the barbies...

“Okay… and what will the delivery address be?” -can you just imagine the guy's look on his face when she/you tell(s) him?

Anyway, great chapter, and I look forward for the next one!

olivia
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