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| Kusabi Makabe 2007-01-16 ch 6, | abuseHi! Just thought I'd check out your other fics since I've only read your humor-related ones. ^_^ May I just say that this was splendidly wonderful? I love how you portrayed everyone and their feelings for Eirika, and how she felt during the final battle against her old friend. And the ending was EirikaxSeth, which I love. :) I'm glad Innes didn't try to kill him after that(the key word, of course, being "try"). So, this was excellent! Ten thousand chocolate points! |
| White Huntress 2006-07-25 ch 6, | abuseAw! Sniffle. That was so enchanting... |
| The One True Koneko 2006-06-21 ch 6, | abuseCool. I never managed to beat the last level because I took the time to train all of my characters. My strongest by the end were Seth, Eirika, and Colm. I made him an assassin at lvl 20, then got THAT up to lvl 20. No one could touch him, and he was uber fast. My fave is teh little thief! Yay! I really liked your story. Seth/Eirika is an awesome pairing. Poor Innes, he should meet a pretty girl in Frelia... |
| Phoenix 2006-06-07 ch 6, anon. | abuseSo, the reminiscence is finally at an end... Overall, this is probably my favorite chapter in the story, with the Innes and Lyon chapters about tied for second. My only complaint is that it seemed odd to me that the heroes' strategy seemed to be to send one person at a time to attack the Demon King and see how they did; I know that this is probably the best strategy to use in the game, but it looks kind of strange written out. That's just my opinion, though. I did really liked the part with everyone's thoughts as Eirika charged the Demon King, though, and the last few lines were perfect. All in all, this was an excellent story, and I want to thank you for taking the time to write it. |
| Nightfalcon Darkwill 2006-06-07 ch 6, | abuseAwsome... *Cheers* I loved the whole thing! Very good job! |
| Kawaii-Chan the Adorable Ge... 2006-06-06 ch 6, | abuseWow...that was great! I'm surprised I'm not bawling in a courner like I was when I finished the game. I'd hoped the whole game Lyon wouldn't die...and he did. C'est la vie... The Demon King's death was very realistic.^_^ Let's see...last playthrough, Ephraim and Eirika were lv. 10 Great Lords, I believe...and they kicked his butt without criticals. EASIEST FINAL BOSS EVER! Keep up the awesome work!^_^ |
| Lady Nephenee Ranulf 2006-06-05 ch 6, | abuseThis was a great story. You really did well in describing Ephraim's typical recklessness, Innes' proud nature (and love!), and everyone's favorite knight, Seth. Oh, and don't forget Eirika. Yay! Thank you for making this SethxEirika as well. Hahaha..."The knight? Seth? He had never seen that coming..." That was great... Thank you for such a wonderful story. |
| Subieko 2006-06-04 ch 6, | abuse*laughs* You beat the demon king in two hits!? Incredible...and I loved this chapter. Awesome ending...especially Eirika ending up with Seth. *laughs* No, really, it was so adorable...and the "a precious memory...a reminiscense" line was perfect. PERFECT. An excellent ending...and the whole story had a really good tone/mood throughout, very consistent...^_^ |
| Casiana1 2006-06-04 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis story was awesome! PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL! Really, you should! |
| CrossoverQueen 2006-06-03 ch 6, | abuseHmm. This was actually pretty good. And this part in the last chapter was so unexpectedly funny, yet it doesn't seem out of place at all. "He would make her happy, and that was what mattered. Besides, he figured with a shrug, it was better than losing her to Ephraim." I swear, that's one of the best double entendres I've ever read in any sort of fic. And it's actually in Innes' character to think something like that. The only possible problem I had with this fic is that you didn't include Saleh. :D Otherwise, this has made it onto my favorites. |
| Souunga 2006-06-03 ch 6, | abuseBEAUTIFUL!! beautiful ending... i'm sad it ended..of course. still... i loved this ending... and i'm glad everything worked out the way it did...=P. |
| BlackMoonWhite 2006-06-03 ch 6, | abuseAw...that is a very sad, bittersweet ending. I love those! (But I can't read too much of them, otherwise I implode) But it really was so sad...I could just imagine it happening, with Lyon (Organ Version) playing in the background...(don't ask.) Very, very, very well written. I loved it! I would add it to my Favourite stories list - but I did that when I read the first chapter. I would add you to my Favourite Authors list - but I did that when I read 'Huzzah!' I bow before your supreme...um, authoress skills! "Seth did something she would never have expected out of him—he reached out for her hand and held it." --YES! SCORE for Seth! Seth rocks for taking the initiative! You rock for writing it! Hurrah! And everyone's happy. "A look of joyful awe crossed her face, completely parallel to the horrified awe on Innes’s face." --Hah! I mean, not 'Hah!' as in, 'Haha, shame!' hah, but 'Hah! as in, 'Hah! Seth beat you to it! Long live SxE!' xD |
| randmkow 2006-06-03 ch 6, | abuse*clap clap clap* ^_^ |
| Rexnos 2006-06-03 ch 6, | abuseGood final chapter. Admittedly, I'm a bigger Innes/Eirika fan, but Seth/Eirika is probably my second favorite. I still need to do her supports with Saleh. I hate pre-premotes... All the same, just as excellent as the chapters before it. I'm sorry it's over... Nice, Rex |
| Gatewalker 2006-06-03 ch 6, | abuseWoot! Great ending there Kender, it really works well. And, that's about all I have to say. Yup... *runs away* |