Have come to pay homage after that comment of yours on latin_doll's fic. Really, it's quite gorgeous; wonderful dialogue, which is a prerequisite for these two. I love how you wove Ajedrez in. I always liked to think that Sands did have something more for her than was shown in the movie.

Sands is a little out of character here, in the kiss scene; but heck, am I complaining?

Ah, I wished this was your fandom too.

I love, love, love this. The writing is beautiful. I must admit that I always thought of Sands as being more in lust than in love with Ajedrez, but you've written their relationship from a different perspective in a way that I actually find believable, even given Sands's tough exterior. I also like the way you characterize El. Overall, great work. Keep it up!

That was really cool and well written! Very 'realistic' if you ask me! XD

Yum!! Me loves this very-very much!