 Unreal Phantom 2006-03-21 . chapter 1Ahh, I was serching the last four pages for a FujiRyo fic and finally found yours. This pairing needs more support from ppl like you and me. And to the review.
--> Don't worry about your grammar! It's fine. But, if you were worried, perhaps consider a beta reader? I didn't think they were OOC. On the contrary, I feel that you portrayed them very well. Nicely done. I congratulate you on the fic.
Keep them coming!
~The Unreal Phantom |