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Bonnie Mizuhara
2006-10-04 . chapter 1
Yay FujiRyo! I love their relationship so much! and who is the homophobic idiot? Hope it's not a Regular because I don't wanna have to kill a Regular... or better yet sic Fuji on them! By the way, can you write another TezuRyoFuji threesome? I can never find one where all three are in it and not a triangle fight...
Unreal Phantom
2006-03-21 . chapter 1
Ahh, I was serching the last four pages for a FujiRyo fic and finally found yours. This pairing needs more support from ppl like you and me. And to the review.

--> Don't worry about your grammar! It's fine. But, if you were worried, perhaps consider a beta reader? I didn't think they were OOC. On the contrary, I feel that you portrayed them very well. Nicely done. I congratulate you on the fic.

Keep them coming!

~The Unreal Phantom
Yumichi
2006-03-18 . chapter 1
aww! :) this story's cute. haha, they ARE just jealous of their beautifulness!! *glomps* :) write more soon! =) i'll be sitting -right here-

here's some cookies for encouragement! ^^
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