Reviews for Papillon Metamorphose

Reviews For: Papillon Metamorphose

Farie Insignias 2008-01-18 ch 2,	abuseSuch suspense! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon!
kochan1 2007-10-30 ch 2,	abuseThe idea of the trees aflame in orange and red blends nicely with the mention of Ayane's element. You don't waste much time here - just moving straight onto the next scene. Very Ayane like too :D Ayane's great - no messing about. Straight to business. Great image of Shiden's hair matching his uniform. Says so much in so little. Ayane scared of flights, who would've thought ^^ I'd love to hear more about why. Would've been nice to see a little more of just how the flight affected her though. Nice surprise at the end with R00 too :) Nice installment, now where's the next one?
Hybrid thing 2007-05-15 ch 2,	abuseInteresting. I hope this turns out to be RyuAyane...>_> Please update soon.
Thunderxtw 2007-03-07 ch 2,	abuseWhoa, hey Tiger! I was wondering if I'd ever see this story pop up again. It's been nearly a year, no? I can see your writing style has changed greatly. And it really shows how talented a person is when they have a story that sucks you in not because of who's involved, but how it is written. Some sentences didn't come up right. I think that has something to do with the submission system. Other than that, nice work! Hope for an update soon!
fireinu 2007-03-01 ch 2,	abuseI like the new chapter.
Farie Insignias 2006-08-25 ch 1,	abuseThe way this was written was beautiful. I can't what to see what's next. Update soon!
Iggy - Essence of Angst 2006-07-05 ch 1,	abuseI thought I had reviewed this story before, but I guess I was wrong. This story, or should I say short ficlet, deserves a review. Absolutely. It is that good. Now, I have seen emotional fics, ranging from anywhere as 12 chapters in length to things that barely exceed a medium one-shot. This is one of the best ones I have ever read. The amount of emotional description in this fic relays exactly what Ayane could possibly be feeling as she watches Genra's body burn. The irony of his death was that he was the only one who truly cared for her as a parent, the only one who defended her honour, and she was the person that had to kill him. With her own hands. Talk about deep pain. The first three paragraphs of description are beautiful. Just beautiful in wording and with the proper emotional conveyed. I would ramble on about how much I loved reading this fic for the third time, but I doubt I can express just how much I enjoyed it. Keep writing, please. We need more brilliant writers like you in the fandom. ~ Iggy ~ (Have I mentioned that Ayane has become my favourite character?)
BelleDayNight 2006-06-01 ch 1,	abuseHeh...this prologue was actually posted the day after my birthday. That's a cool coincidence. Nice start. Just for you I shall give Ayane a fair shot and enjoy chapter one...as soon as you post it!
warpaint 2006-04-08 ch 1,	abuseYay! You wrote a new DOA story and it's about Ayane again! hugs Update again soon, okay? It's good to see your back!
nissepisse 2006-04-01 ch 1,	abusevery promising start, hope to see another chappie soon!
Thunderxtw 2006-03-19 ch 1,	abuseWow! Hey Tiger! Wonderful job on the fic! This one came out of nowhere. Is this that fic you been keeping hidden from me all this time? Cool one indeed. I love the description and detail you applied to give us insight to Ayane's thoughts and feelings after the battle when Genra. I knew someday someone would tackle a fic like this and you already have. I'm intruigued to read more if you plan to continue. That's all from me. PS: Remember not to leave any more author's notes after the first chapter. I'm sure you know why. Well later.
Nirvana Fox 2006-03-19 ch 1,	abuseThis is a rather nicely, detailed opening to the first chapter. It pulled me in already, lol. I would have to say that the only thing that got me was the text in the quotations. It might have been better to put them in italics, but that's just a suggestion and nothing more. Other than that, it's a good start.
Gleeful Melancholy 2006-03-18 ch 1,	abuseHi TigerEyes! I was happy when I saw this myself, and I'm glad to see your work back up too. I'm really excited to read another good Ayane story, especially infused with details from DoA4. I liked the details in the beginning, like the likening of the sparks to dying fireflies. It made the whole chapter consistent with the theme of death, and it was short and sweet. Best of luck with your next chapter, and I will definitely keep up with this fic. --Red--
kochan1 2006-03-18 ch 1,	abuseWell...what can I say, it's been quite a while in coming but you've certainly been diligent in bringing it down from 20+ words to under 500. But what we're finally left with is mostly Gold. Moreso than a good kickstart, I think it also serves as an excellent reference for you to go back through every once in a while as you know what it was like before and after editing :) Story wise, I'd certainly love to see just how Ayane's affected by said curse and how others around her will be should her behaviour change or should she suffer - Yes...make her suffer...give her hell...paain...agony... (ahem) Till next chapter :) Nii-san

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