*sigh* Why are your stories always so darned cute? Loved it again!

I didn't really like the end, but I liked that...it was interesting. Most people concentrate on his eyes or hair...don't think I ever really noticed his lips...

CUTE! when exactly was that supposed to have taken place? jsut out of curiousity.

This is really nice. The repetition of the word "lips" is a little weird, maybe just because "lips" is kind of an awkward word.

But this is really good.

Its good.I like it it has good potencial. cna't wait for more!

oh! very nicely put, and i like the comparison to benny :) well done

Very sweet!

So Sweet!

Nicole

That was beautiful! I loved it so much! That was really great. That makes me want to write my own RENT fic. Heck, why don't I? Thanks for a beautiful story.

:3 The Jumpy Little Bread Pastry