It may be a few years later, but I think Crawling describes this perfectly, or perhaps Tenacious D and City Hall hshs. Seriously tho, fab fic so far, written like a pro!

Yours

Paul

totally awesome fic! keep up the good work!

(Overall review) This story has all the good romance trimmings: Pokeshipping, Rocketshipping, and even a Brock/OC romance, too. The adventure elements are superb, too, presented in a more realistic situation regarding Team Rocket. Tons of romance, adventure, and drama for a very engrossing, well-rounded fanfic. This is one of my all-time favorites.

Personally i think minutes to miodnight is better i think in between suits ash too. Go Linkin Park No More Sorroe would be good for giovanni no roads left is pretty awesome for the way ash i felling

I like it. i hope there's some AshxMisty fluff in here. K

Oh my God that was one of the best stories I have ever read! And that's saying something because I read ALOT! You started with the Ash that we all know and love and devloped his character as you did with all of them. The situation was amazingly set up and I'm amazed at how much growth was brought into these characters! I can't waite to read more from you!

00b3r

This is really a good story and each chapter i read made it even more interesting to read.

i like the way Ash and Misty expressed there feeling for each other, feel kinda sorry for Broak but he always bounces back ;)

U wrote the story prefectly and that was a great ending, keep up the great work. :)

Catch ya later!

i think it was too soon

but hey im not the one who is writing it so good job really.

keep up the good work.

go Gary!

Gary is da best!

you are one of the best writers on ff!_

-The One and Only King of Games,Seto-kun

Good story! But WHY did you have Kiyoko be killed? That was so said :(

Good Story! Lovin it! And Kanto in Japan is the same as Indigo in the English version, the games are slighty different than the TV versions.

Oh wow. That was beautiful. Seriousy good.
Fantastic. I loved it.
Rosie