 Aiselne Phoenix Nocturnus 2009-04-09 . chapter 11(Overall review) This story has all the good romance trimmings: Pokeshipping, Rocketshipping, and even a Brock/OC romance, too. The adventure elements are superb, too, presented in a more realistic situation regarding Team Rocket. Tons of romance, adventure, and drama for a very engrossing, well-rounded fanfic. This is one of my all-time favorites. |
 anoymus 2008-08-20 . chapter 5 Personally i think minutes to miodnight is better i think in between suits ash too. Go Linkin Park No More Sorroe would be good for giovanni no roads left is pretty awesome for the way ash i felling |
 JamesRKS 2008-04-26 . chapter 1I like it. i hope there's some AshxMisty fluff in here. K |
 BroadwayBabe2010 2008-02-09 . chapter 11 Oh my God that was one of the best stories I have ever read!! And that's saying something because I read ALOT! You started with the Ash that we all know and love and devloped his character as you did with all of them. The situation was amazingly set up and I'm amazed at how much growth was brought into these characters! I can't waite to read more from you!! |
 Kefka VI 2007-09-18 . chapter 100b3r |
 Paradice 2006-02-18 . chapter 11 This is really a good story and each chapter i read made it even more interesting to read.
i like the way Ash and Misty expressed there feeling for each other, feel kinda sorry for Broak but he always bounces back ;)
U wrote the story prefectly and that was a great ending, keep up the great work. :)
Catch ya later! |
 noah 2004-09-01 . chapter 7 i think it was too soon
but hey im not the one who is writing it so good job really.
keep up the good work. |
 Seto-kun 2004-08-29 . chapter 9go Gary! |
 Seto-kun 2004-08-29 . chapter 6Gary is da best! |
 Seto-kun 2004-08-28 . chapter 2you are one of the best writers on ff!^_^
-The One and Only King of Games,Seto-kun |
 Nicole 2004-07-27 . chapter 11 Good story!! But WHY did you have Kiyoko be killed? That was so said :( |
 Nicole 2004-07-27 . chapter 5 Good Story!! Lovin it! And Kanto in Japan is the same as Indigo in the English version, the games are slighty different than the TV versions. |
 Jillie Rose 2004-02-14 . chapter 11Oh wow. That was beautiful. Seriousy good.
Fantastic. I loved it.
Rosie |
 Scotland1983 2004-01-08 . chapter 11 great story inspired |
 Devi Dark Wolf 2003-06-18 . chapter 11Then I'll try and make your day... again. ^^ LOL.
Great end to a great fic. Not too corny and ending, but it has closure enough. And believe me, I'm used to not getting enough closure.
*sigh* I hope Jessie wasn't being serious and that they won't go "bad" again and start some band of baddies. Waa! I would be sad! They can just be thieves, cuz it's in their blood, but nothing more.
I actually felt kinda bad for Kiyoko's dad. Even though he was on TR's side, he wasn't really killing anyone, directly, anyway. That man can only go downhill emotionally from there. And I feel bad for Brock, too. Sure, he likes every pretty girl, but what you said about he will never know how the relationship would've gone was really sad. Poor guy.
More fics! I must read more! *foams at mouth as it is 2 am* Great job, Karen! *applauds* |