 gabyhyatt 2007-03-01 . chapter 1it was so sweet |
 LtStorm 2006-05-05 . chapter 1Very cute fic, and about one of the few straight pairings I like. There's not enough Jin/Fuu out there, from what I've seen.
Keep up the good work. |
 Poison Fairy 2006-05-04 . chapter 1omg update soon!
oh and in the show i didnt get who jin liked really, like in the episode when they're sharin stuff about themselves around a campfire in like the second last episode. jin was talkin sumthin and fu said mugen was a jerk then they hugged! |
 DeSilva 2006-04-15 . chapter 1I liked this piece a lot. I also found Jin's reservations about seeing or touching Fuu's exposed neck especially charming. Were you aware that was historically correct? I suppose you did. Anyway, it was altogether lovely. |
 poison fairy 2006-04-04 . chapter 1 aww, jin and fuu! thats so cute! sorry if that sounded a bit scary... |
 Odi et amo. 2006-03-24 . chapter 1Aw...
That was so sweet...
It was perfect... |
 Shari Joy Rose 2006-03-22 . chapter 1that was really cute. nicely written. i enjoyed it. |
 autumngold 2006-03-21 . chapter 1 Thank you for this wonderful story!! I really liked how you described Jin and Fuu's relationship!! Hope you write another story soon!! |
 Sephiroth1Ripley8 2006-03-21 . chapter 1That was very sweet...but not mushy. It was a nice balance. |
 Lou 2006-03-21 . chapter 1 Yeah-heh! The Mugen-snort was fun. XD This was cute, even though it seemed a little...strange at the beginning. No particular reason for it to be, lol, but it seemed to drag a bit there. But it was cute, and well-written.
The necklace hadn't weighed hardly anything, but as he lay on his back, drifting off to sleep, he noticed its absense, and was relieved by it.
^That^ was a nice touch, too. ;-D |
 X-TremeKibaLuva156 2006-03-19 . chapter 1wow, that was really good. i thought everyone was in character to the T, even Mugen in his sleep. lol. well, ima look to see if you have any other stories. if u do, ill review |
 Jill 2006-03-19 . chapter 1 Super cute! Great job writing Jin!!~_^ |
 Dearest 2006-03-18 . chapter 1really wonderfully written. enjoyed it all. it was set up very well in that the emotions were communicated sufficently as were the mental images. i could see it all as i read. i really appreciate the humor you added as well, my favorite part-
"I have no use for it, myself...and I certainly wasn't going to give it to Mugen."
Just then, almost as if in acknowledgement to the mention of his name, Mugen gave a particularly loud snort, and they both chuckled. He always was good at breaking the tension, apparently even in his sleep.
"It would match his earrings," Fuu said, making Jin smile again, and this time it actually reached his eyes.
lol. i could totally see that happening in my head. a great read. thanks! |
 Blue Arashi 2006-03-18 . chapter 1aw! that's soo cute!! aww... |