Wow! I really like how well this story is written, and the fact that you have updated a fair few chapters already! I simply cannot wait for more. I find myself liking your style even more with every bit I read.

Okay, I'm leaving reviews for both chapters here because they were tied together too well to do separate ones (plus I'm lazy). I love how typically teenager-in-her-first-job Alde is with her worries about her supe's opinion, her boredom and such. Good rationale for why she's stuck working grounds crew. :P Tragic backstory.

Definatley looking foward to the upcoming chapters so keep up the great work and update when you can can't wait :)

About time you updated this... :0) You know I love this story and *poke* where's the next chapter?

And for the record, she updated this elsewhere on March 25.

great story

This rocks. Please continue.

Keep going. this seems good!

Interesting idea as presented from the summary, but I really don't have a clue yet as to whats going on, but I'm also a bit stupid today :) Good dialogue so far and the plot is different, can't wait to see more! Cheerio!

Is it me or was there a trailer up for this on tf. net? Anyways..I like it. great begining :) Can't wait to see where it goes.