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acosta perez jose ramiro
2009-09-12 . chapter 8
Hey, nice to see you're back to updating this story.

M... one question; how did Roger knock out Melissa when 3 super girls, a magician, and a Sasquatch couldn't? The stick had silver on it or what?

Keep the good writing.
Sayuki12
2009-07-14 . chapter 8
u could make 1 where they go to a group camp (melissa not included) and they all run in with dark chimera demons, chimera demons suck out life energy and are able to turn victims into minions. i totally made this up btw. Anyways, to stop the chimera demons, you have to tak a lock of the head chimeras fur( usually the head honchos r twice as big as the rest, also chimeras hav dark fur but the leader has white) throw the lock of fur into a stream located at the mountain near the campsite, it will destroy the demon and rescue the minions, roger helps out alot in this one. Oh and the camp is like really far down from the mountain, probably a 15 hour climb, they have to put the lock of fur into the river before 24 hours, or the minions will reamin chimeras for ever and they are attacked by bounty hunters and demons and such while climbing said mountian. Well? whaddya think?
Excalibur2008
2009-02-08 . chapter 8
You know you could always do a version of Little Big Mah the one where Ah Mah is deaged set in this story.
Prominence Flare
2009-02-01 . chapter 8
AHA. AWESOME. I was really worried for a while that you had abandoned this series. It's excellent, keeps everyone in character, and expands on the story fantastically. No worries, I'll try to think up an episode pitch or two.
Chaos Dragon
2009-01-09 . chapter 8
i about squealed in glee when i saw this update. an excellent installment. i watched the show ages ago so i've not a single idea, but i'll see about finding the time to refresh my memory and drop you a pm if anything comes to mind.

~cd
tearthgrrl
2009-01-07 . chapter 8
Long time no see! (and first to review new chap!!) Personally I would've preferred it if Melissa had forgotten the whole thing (unless the the next chapter she gets slimed by a monster right before her mind's wiped and she sees she's covered in goo ;) *hint hint wink wink*)

Nonetheless, I liked it. And, call me a hopeless romantic, could you work a little more on Jody and Dennis, now that he knows she knows and all. Oh, and one more question: ever hear of "Taylor Evermore"?
Raven Hufflepuff
2008-06-14 . chapter 7
Pretty good story. I like the way Marcus,Lilah, and Dennis and Ray Ray worked together to get the girls back! Rodger is great, too!
Raven Hufflepuff
2008-06-13 . chapter 1
Bwahahaha! I LOVE it! This story rocks! I think the powers that Ophelia and Jody got just perfect for them! I can see Jody running at superhuman speed and Ophelia putting the smackdown on the monsters! Jody is a hyperactive girl and Ophelia is so goth that it is her persona!
tearthgrrl
2008-06-07 . chapter 7
This story was AMAZING! I wish I could write Juniper Lee fics even remotely good as yours. I'm starting one of my own and hopefully it will receive much attention. I'd like your advice so if you like I'll send you a piece of the first chapter; I'll even accept concrit and light flames. Write on Brad!!
acosta perez jose ramiro
2007-06-19 . chapter 7
And now, Roger knows!

Excellent job here; nice to see all June and company's allies here and how they help the girls. Dennis can be a pain in the neck, but, to be honest, it comes handy to have another magician besides Monroe on your side; Lila is the strength and fighting skills reserve; Dennis is the moral support and, since everyone seems to trust him, a good option to cool down his companions in a dangerous situation; finally, Ray Ray's role is similar to Ron Stoppable in the Kim Possible's series, the distraction, the one who does the unexpected and surprises everyone.

Keep the good writing.
Kraven the Hunter
2007-06-17 . chapter 7
Not a bad chapter, seeing all of the zes' friends (except Roger) work together to save them. & speaking of Roger, whoa. Looks like before long he'll have everything figured out too.
tlegg
2007-06-17 . chapter 7
nice very good, its nice to see the rest of the team in action, oh and nice cliff hanger
go_sullivan
2007-04-22 . chapter 6
AH! I love winter break too! Haha. Hope you get some free time to write and to enjoy life!

I just hope this story isn't dead...
go_sullivan
2007-04-22 . chapter 3
YAY! I really enjoy your series. I find it hard to find Juniper Lee fics, so I'm glad I came across this one.

I love this because Jody and Ophelia are involved in it. I love their scenes with June on the show. And the plot is great. Seriously, the whole I Stand Alone thing they make June go throw bums me out. So I like your team twist. Because sidekicks are awesome. It's weird because the other cartoons in this vain allow for friends to know. Danny Phantom has Sam and Tucker. The American Dragon has Spud and Trixie...

I loved your Halloween Special. Haha I enjoyed your references! I loved shawn of the dead!
Von Stupidstien
2007-02-23 . chapter 6
Great Story! You know, as read chapter 3, I couldn't help but think "This is just like Dead Rising".
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