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| Blooappall 2007-03-05 ch 3,  | abuseOoh! I'm liking this! Please continue! |
| zachattack 2006-07-22 ch 1, | abuseGood Prologue. I was hoping Aang and Katara would get together any way |
| Blue Arrows 2006-05-10 ch 3, | abusefabulous! magnificent! i really liked the battle...you are the first to have thought of the avatar spirit in a battle. everyone was true to character! it has been so long since an update, i almost forgot what happened, but now i remember why this story is on story alert! ps: i liked your disclaimer :) |
| Vicki So 2006-05-05 ch 3, | abuseGood chapter. So I take it Zuko and Katara will team up to rescue their traveling mates from the evil Azula? That would be cool. |
| 4EverSleepingDragon 2006-05-03 ch 3, | abuseYeah, I perfer Mei and Tai Li too. |
| Storybender 2006-05-03 ch 3, | abuseOuch! Sucks to be Iroh, Aang, and Sokka, doesn't it? You may take a long time to update, but it's well worth the wait. Now get our two free heroes together, 'cause there's love in the air! |
| Elf-Warrior-13 2006-04-10 ch 2, | abuseOh, very suspensful! Poor Zuko, his sister's a **. Ah well, such is life. :D +Alert |
| Vicki So 2006-04-09 ch 2, | abuseInteresting start. You've placed the fic at a really awkward time, since we have no idea about the repercussions of everything that's happened in the new season so far so kudos to you for trying to work around it all. You've got flawless writing - a real relief when you encounter so much bad grammar. I look forward to reading more! |
| Jakia 2006-04-08 ch 2, | abuseBird thing? Chocobo. It's the only logical explaination. And have you seen the new episode? The Swamp? GO BUY IT IF YOU HAVEN'T!! ::is in desperate need of someone to talk to:: Jak |
| Komo Pineconeseed 2006-04-08 ch 2, | abuseNice job. Update soon, please! ~Komo Pineconeseed |
| Storybender 2006-04-08 ch 2, | abuseClassical music is clearly helpful in writing, because this was fantastic. I'm totally hooked. Rest, get refreshed, and get your butt back in front of the computer and update! |
| Junsui Chikyuu 2006-04-08 ch 2, | abusefetish! YAY for fetishes! Yay I say! |
| Rashaka 2006-04-08 ch 2, | abuseExcellent! I'm glad you're not letting this story just "die". I've been waiting for a Z/K chapter fic from you for a long time. A part of this chapter gave me trouble-- who started the fire, exactly? That wasn't clear to me. |
| Kitsune6 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abusePretty good. It's okay, which is more than I can say for most Avatar fics (which are still better than DBZ or Sailor Moon fics). You've got the dialog and characterization down. I'd break those long paragraphs up a bit, just to make it easier to read. Internal thoughts in italics can also help. Good enough to get on my alerts. Keep up the good work. =) |
| Komo Pineconeseed 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abuseThank you so much for writing a Zutara fic. After the episode "The Avatar State" and watching Zuko cut his hair (which made me sad, cuz he had one of the coolest hair ever) I kind of... lost faith in Zutara. So once again, that you for writing Zutara. Good luck and update soon, please! ~Komo Pineconeseed |