it wasn't crappy
actcally i rather enjoyed this fick it was really cute

I thought this was Fabulous♥ Are you sure this is your first attempt at Naruto fanfiction? (looks around slyly) Ah Well keep up the good work and I shall luv you for life (heehee)

Kittie

Cool idea. ^^ If only we could learn how to kiss. Probably would prevent awkward first experiences. = )

Thanks for sharing such a nice one-shot! =)

that was awesome! making out after reading scrolls damnit! XD

This is amazing! A fantastic one-shot! :D I really love the way you portray both characters! Continue to write stories like this ne? Please! XD

"Sasuke chided himself, Kiss now, think later." - hahaha! too funny! that was great!@ i wonder what would happen if SAKURA found the two supposed rivals snogging on the table like that in an undoubtably compramising position! oh the shock and horror! *runs away from imagionary inner- sakura gone wild*

That was your first Naruto fnafiction attempt?!?
It was amazing!

That was so cute

aww that was cute.its not bad and your not a bad writer i LOVE it! hehe do more!

m, yummy. (need i say more?)

cute

XD LMAO "Kiss now, think later." that's brilliant. XD haha...if i ever need a makeout scene, i'll ask/beg you to write one for me.. please?!! TT.TTi can't write these..makeout things/or lemons... T.T not really my thing..^_^"

...I really, really want, like, the librarian to show up, and end up passing out from a nosebleed...
OR BETTER YET! Kakashi, checking out his next COUGHnovelCOUGH, but he ends up not -cough-hem!- needing it...
Props to you! -highfivespazzfall-

Al-RIGHT! Library action! *insert dirty puns about "checking out" "books" and "researching"*

Nah, really, this was good. Really good.