Nice. I wish they would have talked a bit more, but nice. Good writing, liked Simon's feelings and Remus' characterization.

wow tht was sweet ;p

I LOVE this story. Brilliant. Being a big fan of Remus and now Teddy does help. Perfectly in Character.

I was wondering what Remus had said to the werewolf in the hospital, and I really enkoyed this version. It was very well written and overall, a wonderful story. Keep writing, you're great! :)

i was going to write something like this. i don't think i ever got 'round to it.

this is excellent. love. it

keep up the good work.

-red

Very good - you captured the true essence of what that situation could have been like. Thank you and I hope you continue writing.

This was surprisingly good. I've always thought that the scene in St. Mungo's when Remus wandered off to talk to the other werewolf could have been taken further...but that's why we have fanfiction, now isn't it?

If you have the time, you should check out the two one-shot stories by Jinxeh, one of which is remarkably like this one. She wrote a story about Remus Lupin visiting St. Mungo's to offers his 'consolations and support' to a young, female, werewolf victim that he read about in the paper. "It Takes One to Know One" is the title of the first one, and its one-shot sequel is called "One and the Same". The first one is astoundingly similiar to this one, and so I'm sure that you'll enjoy it.

This was good, though perhaps a little disjointed, and at times the dialogue was just a little bit forced. But excellent imagery, and a good steady flow for a one-shot story. I liked this 'Simon' character as well.

Excellent job.