Reviews for Year One: Abby Black And The Sword of Slytherin

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Remember The Darkness 2008-09-01 ch 24,	abuseHaha Awesome. I enjoyed how you used the comentary to tell most of the match instead of doing it all from Abby's PoV. Can't wait to find out who that one prefect was talking to! So mysterious. Haha. Hopeing for a quick update! Zoodles -NickleMT
Hodemi 2008-08-28 ch 24,	abuseGood on Abby! I knew she'd triumph...
cocogirl198 2008-08-04 ch 23,	abusegood job keep it up!=]
BookRose 2008-07-08 ch 23,	abuseHiya Darth! I have to say I'm really enjoying this story, but there are a few little errors I've noticed while reading this. They aren't much, and don't really lessen the story, but after awhile, if there are enough of them, they can drive a person a little crazy. I mean all of this as constructive criticism, and would strongly suggest you find someone to help you correct all the little grammar and punctuation mistakes. It happens in a few of your other stories too. I'd even help you if you like. This is not a reflection on your stories, especially this one, although it could use a little more British-ness in it than American. So actually, could you please update sometime soon? I don't care which story; as long as its unfinished and needs to be finished. ;) Much love! @~BookRose~@
ccsahplvr1 2008-06-19 ch 23, anon.	abuseWell I got bored and decided to do some rereading. And I still love this story as much as I did the first time I read it. I also went to your profile thingy on here to see what else you've written, and I saw that you're from SC. SO AM I! I so totally freaked out bc you're the first person I've seen on here that's from here. Anyways. I really hope you update soon. Have a good day!
ccsahplvr1 2008-05-16 ch 23, anon.	abuseI absolutely love this story. Please keep writing.
Hodemi 2008-05-13 ch 23,	abuseIt was a nice surprise to see a new chapter for this story, which I've greatly enjoyed. I think Abby let Percy off the hook too easily, but that's cos she's such a decent forgiving person. I'd be a bit more vindictive! I'm looking forward now to the Quidditch game, let's hope Abby comes through and keeps Slytherin's Honour.
AllieCat1 2008-05-12 ch 23,	abuseHi Carl, Sweetie, great chapter, love the Halloween Prank and can't wait to see the next exciting chapter that you will post soon I hope. Abby and her friends seem to be having some fun times at Hogwartz. It's a GREAT story!:) Gotta go for now a lot of chores to catch up on. Talk to you later. Love, Allison
hermonine 2007-11-28 ch 22,	abuseGreat chapters. Keep up the good work and update soon!
lilyqueen777 2007-11-01 ch 22,	abuseI love this chapter! and i cant wait for the next chapter :P
Lizzete 2007-09-18 ch 22,	abuseI loved the way Abby handled the whole Flinty issue, she was so brave! Please, update soon ^.^
AllieCat1 2007-09-18 ch 22,	abuseHey Carl, Great story! Can't wait to see the Halloween prank next! :)Sorry about Abby's issues. I hope she gets things worked out. Take Care! Halloween is my fav holiday! :) Keep up the good writing-Love, Allison
Lizzete 2007-08-26 ch 21,	abuseThis is getting really good so far! Please, update soon, I want to read more ^.^
BookRose 2007-08-25 ch 6,	abuseHey Darth a quick question: If Dumbledore waited so long to tell Harry, who is not related to him, who he did not have the pleasure of knowing as he grew up, because he cared about and loved Harry so much, then why would he tell Abby something so horrible when she was 11 or almost? It would make since that for as much as he loves Harry, he would love Abby even more and would wait until she was about Harry's age when he found out about his prophecy right? I mean, couldn't she have little hints and clues that would lead her to it eventually til Dumbledore told her? I don't know. Anyway, small nitpick: Why would Voldemort just use spells and potions to impregnante Natalie, when, being the horrible sadist that he is,he couldn't just rape her repeatedly over and over again? Or is Dumbledore just trying to convince himself that it happened the spell way? Anyway just wondering about this stuff! @~BookRose~@ P.S. I'm rereading this stuff, it's why I ask these questions.
Hodemi 2007-08-21 ch 21,	abuseGreat chapter. I'm guessing Aries is an immortal who's going to be looking over Abby.

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