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Wandering-Recluse
2009-06-06 . chapter 3
Next chapter. Soon. Seriously. This is an amazing phic! I love it so much! It's really unique, even though there's only 3 chapters so far. But I need an explination. What happens down in Erik's lair? Was that a dream or was Christine really down there? Can you tell me? Thanks and update soon! I love it!
Silverwind24
2006-04-18 . chapter 3
I still like it! Erik's visions of Christine are certainly very creepy, but if I'm seeing where this is going correctly, it's a realistic modernization! update when you can, I know how it is :)
tink20
2006-04-17 . chapter 3
Unusual chapter. It kind of took me by surprise. I really wasnt expecting that EC interaction at all. But glad it happened. This should be interesting where this all goes. Looking forward to your next update!
Mini Nicka
2006-04-16 . chapter 3
Eriks loony but good chapter.
adarabelle
2006-03-28 . chapter 2
hmm.. not much of the stalker here... it has to b Erik right?
tink20
2006-03-27 . chapter 2
Kind of a filler chapter. But get a better look into Christines situation with her mothers death and how her and her dad are coping. I think it has potential if you keep going with it. Im looking forward to more! Update as soon as you can!
El Loopy
2006-03-24 . chapter 1
Cool idea. Its good and I like a bit of a thriller.
adarabelle
2006-03-21 . chapter 1
oo.. who's stalking her?? This is so exciting... quick... update now! I love your work so much...
LilyEvansPotter4456
2006-03-21 . chapter 1
This is good so far. Please continue!
Silverwind24
2006-03-20 . chapter 1
yes! I always love reading more from you, and this seems really interesting. I like the first person narrative so far, the modernization, and the promise of a different, unexplored Erik. please update!
tink20
2006-03-19 . chapter 1
oh man! Exciting. Im really looking forward to your diffrent Erik. I can kind of already see darker tones/vibes comeing from him. This is really intersting. And Im already looking forward to more! Please update as soon as you can! This is so good already!
Voldivoice
2006-03-19 . chapter 1
Finally people havnt done genuinely insane Erik much nowadays lol ah proper stalker this time nothing mushy lol! keep going need more am a bit upset other story didnt pan out but oh well lol

Lady Extremely English Voldemort
Mini Nicka
2006-03-18 . chapter 1
So far so good but is this E/C? More please.
potophan1010
2006-03-18 . chapter 1
I am interested to see where this goes, please update soon :)
Countess Alana
2006-03-18 . chapter 1
hi! i love how u started this! it's totally original and i can tell its gonna get even better! i do so wonder who was following her home?? i eagerly await ur next chapter! excellent first chapter!
~Countess Alana~
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