Your song needs to rhyme better
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That. Was. AMAZING! you are so right!

Hm...I've heard of TMM, but i never read it... (runs to nearest manga store)
Yay!
...
ahem.
This was actually really good. I HAVE heard You can't suceed on Broadway...
but this is WAY better!
...
Rock on!

I liked the song, but my favorite part is when Kahn gets beat up. I haven't even seen Mew Mew Power and now I never want to (actually, I didn't even want to before). Well, that's all. Bye.

Very, very well done.

O, MI, EFFEN GAWD! that is the best song evah i wanna download it on my ipod hehehe funny funny

wow this was really funny...now you see what people like me do when they can't sleep during the night when they're supposed to be resting for a supposed job interveiw: go on here. but hey! I've tried sleeping and woke up like twenty thousand times! If only my dad hadn't taken all my sleeping pills already. yeah...heh im not trying to flame your or nothing, but I actually kinda like the the mmp theme song. Come on, you gotta admit it IS kinda catchy. but yes, like you i hate all the changes to our beloved tokyo mew mew. oh and by the way, you DO know that ryou and keichiiro are straight even in the japanese anime version right (watch episode 14)? sure in the manga they might be gay, but not in the anime.

ok good night

I AGREE WITH EVERYTHING IN THIS. *joins fan mob*

Hey, good story thingy! :D

Thats not kool, mew mew power, is the best! and if i were u, i would actually grow up, and get over it. its just a show deal wit it

I really liked your story, but I started of watching mew mew power because we have no Tokyo mew mew in Australia (Although I've read some books! XD). I loved your rap/song/poem (I'm not quite sure. I was imagining elevator music XD). But please don't bash mmp too much. Also coincidentaly there is a guy at my school called Kish! COOL HUH!! (hyperness has kicked in). Um... I'm gonna go now.

-You have just been reviewed by "THE QUEEN OF RANDOMNESS" Muhahahahahaha

That was very funny! Personally I don't hate Mew Mew Power I enjoy it even though yes they tottaly messed up on every thing! And please don't listen to TsubasaTomoe
( No offence TsubasaTomoe,This is just my opinion!) I think what she said was mean though partly true, there are alot of fans but those fans are the ones that either never new what Tokyo Mew Mew even is, Know what it is but never watched the origanal episode or people like me who don't really mind! But it's hilarius! I especialy like the part where it says

And Dren’s voice drives us insane,

Did you mess with Kish’s brain?

YAY! peaceful and entertaining protest! i don't know the basic tune to Monty Python, but it's still a good read. good job. you did a service for all fans. ja ne!

... *clap clap clap* Yay! Die Kahn, Die! ^.^

that was very funny!