this was sad. but beautiful in a way. your right, it made me want to shed a tear...

This is in story format but really it's pure poetry. It seems like every word was picked perfectly. Every sentence was connected to the next in a long chain of tear-jerking perfection. Re-reading it really DOES choke you up more than the first time around, as you understand and pick up more than the other time through.

Keep on writing, and dammit this needs more reviews! >

yeah it really is sad.,..I'm so proud of this fic.; IT'S GOING INTO MY C2