This is a really interesting story, considering its protagonist is a hybrid (NOT a bad thing!)

The only problem i have is that at times you make the main character...a BIT too girly...but other than that I apologize for my bluntness

All in all it's a great story, and I have a few ideas to add if you'd like to hear them, though I doubt you need too XD

-Zit-

UPDATE NOW!

I really like your stories:)

AWWWW UPDATE!

I don't know, if you're going to write more or not, but the story is so great and i really would like to read more! :D

This has been an awesome story! I read the other one and went straight to this one! Gettting very exciting now, youve left it at another cliff hanger XD I originally saw some art work on DA for these stories, so I subscribed to you there and found your stories from there also! Love your work, cant wait for the next chapter!

*grins and pokes* Hey I do hope you finish this story its getting very good ) *grins* I know you have not updated in a long time but hopes you will decide to continue it. I am guessing she was just got grabbed by that Yautja bitch lol. I so want to see Tia'ja kick her behind.

i love this story and i hope you update it soon

it was a good story ... but... Is that it ? ? ? D:

I hope Tia'ja kicks Arrel's ass for good! .

Good luck on chapter 14 and on your other story.

Wow what a great story I have just read both AvP Hero and A hero's Daughter and I must say I am impressed with the story and would love to read more soon so please write more I am on my hands and knees begging you Please write more soon! 1,0 out of 5 rating on this story from me!

hi

plz update soon plz

You should finish thi one. Most def girl, it is really god.

OMG...

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

maybe for 14, kee'vek and tia'ja will kill Arrel. that bitch REALLY needs to die already. I hate her.