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| mikebreslau 2005-08-24 ch 6,  | abuseRead it before. Read it again. Loved it before. Loved it again. Good, clean fun. Mike |
| wolf-in-hell 2005-03-13 ch 6, | abuseI happen to be a fan of "Ranma gets all the girls" type stories, so I really liked this one. And while I know it is a finished story and probably never going to be touched again, I can dream of it being expanded, if not in this time line, maybe another. You never know with that little black cat and his well... |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-04-09 ch 6, | abuseAnother case of simple wish fufillment. *chuckle* So when's Dragonbard getting to work? |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-04-09 ch 5, | abuseGood chapter. Ryouga seems a bit more evil tho'. Of course all the negative energy he has would change him, and not for the better. I love the SM xovers. |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-04-09 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter. I just wish Spatula girl had arrived in time to get a tat! |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-04-09 ch 3, | abuse"vile poisoners who do this to airen!" Obviously she'd spent too much time watching Ranma fight Kuno and listening to the latter's speeches. LOL. Scary thought! I like the new Ryouga. Too bad he didn't wish for intelligence and self control. |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-04-09 ch 2, | abuseWould Callahan really allow Genma and Soun be patrons there? |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-04-09 ch 1, | abuseVery nice begining. I love the humor in the story. |
| the DragonBard 2001-11-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI finally got a new chapter of this fic released. If you want, ask and I'll send it to you so it can be posted here. |
| MadHat 2001-07-16 ch 6, anon. | abuseSo it was Puck who was the one who made the cruse pools in the frist place. I like this story you should continue with this. |
2001-05-24 ch 6, anon. | abuselove this story |
| Shadow of a Rose 2001-05-19 ch 6, | abusenice |
| Lufio 2001-05-18 ch 3, anon. | abuseSome changes. Liked the improvement on the scene where Ranma shatters the ice pillars. Still like the summary of a normal week for Ranma. But now, I finally get a chance to voice the little things that've been bothering since the first time I read this completed Bet fic. Could you give a little more background for Mao Yin? She's a background char, but could you elaborate more on how Ryouga rescued her and what villages Ryouga tried to get her adopted? Also, the lines where Nodoka and Genma arrived at the school. Even though it's not Kasumi, I can't help but think it's her initially. Clarify it more? Also, when Kasumi explains to a newly-awakened Akane what happened to Ranma, Kasumi refers to explaining to Akane earlier. I think Akane and Nabiki are getting mixed together here or there's a few lines missing on Nabiki waking up. Also, could you elaborate more on how the girls initially noticed the changes in Ranma's tattoo? Nabiki just jumped into an explanation. There's no mention of what prompted her to say that. All there was was confirmation on the presence of other tattoos. Anyways, have fun with the revisions. |
| The DragonBard 2001-05-17 ch 2, anon. | abuseJust so you know, I 'did' mean it when I said I was continuing this fic... and I'm trying. It's just... EVERY TIME I TRY AND WRITE THE NEXT PART IT STINKS!!!! Sorry, but that fact is getting to me. I've rewritten it more times than I care to count. So, sooner or later I 'will' get the new part written. Sorry for those who have been waiting. |
| FanBoy 2001-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat beggining! I need more!" |