Reviews for We Live in the Hearts of Those We Leave Behind

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Stoneage Woman 2006-03-27 ch 8,	abuseAmazing, amazing, amazing story. I am so glad you had Julius die in the end, not only because it was more realistic, but because it caused Maximus more pain, and I, ever the sadist, love Maximus in pain. Seriously, though, your plots are awesome, and I love your battle plans and stuff. Well done. You're going on my faves!
Koda 2003-12-02 ch 8, anon.	abuseVery kewl.
cal 2003-10-31 ch 8, anon.	abusehi there! :) found this story. glad that i did. looking forward to reading the next part. :) thanks for writting.
Hockey Gurl 2003-09-03 ch 8,	abuseI've read almost all of your stories, you're amazing. Please update this and do'nt end it here!
asd 2003-09-01 ch 8, anon.	abusePlease please please continue this. This chapter was so sad!
Ides of March 2003-05-29 ch 8,	abuseI started crying... ~Lisa This is going on my favourites list.
Ariana Deralte 2002-01-29 ch 8,	abusePoor Julius. Great story as always. I'm feeling a bit melancoly from that ending now...Is that it?
Ariana Deralte 2002-01-28 ch 2,	abuseYou have this knack for writing really good, dramatic lines. At least now I know where Commodus went...
Marxbros 2001-12-11 ch 8,	abuseRobin, thank you so so much for adding this chapter! I know my earlier review was a bit harsh, but here you wiped away most of my criticism. It is so good to see Maximus cry--we tend to forget that he is a human being too. And the line about Maximus forgiving Commodus because he was Marcus Aurelius' son...that was really powerful. Anyway, this chapter completes the story...thanks for writing it.
Alien Angie 2001-11-29 ch 6,	abusebrilliant as always! Im so glad you finished this. i have been reading it on felixlegions, but finished it here. the ending is amazing, you ar such a talented writer its not fair! :-) I love the ending, the way that you portrya both Maximus and Commodus, the way that they almost seemed to make up and then not...I dont know. i like the understanding that Commodus has, and the way you let him speak his side, 'he did it for Rome' which is a part that many people dont touch on, prefering to portray him as that evil bas***d that killed that gorgeous general..lol I'll email you soon, right now Im trying to do my Horse Industry assignment so yet again my stories have been burried under work. :-(
Marxbros 2001-11-26 ch 7,	abuseI have to say that I really really liked this up until the last chapter. I never saw (hmm, how to do this w/o spoiling it?) the twist with Julius coming...I thought everything was going to be happily ever after. I love how you surprised us here, I was really shocked when I read that chapter. I thought there was good action and dialogue, I enjoyed the story, but the last part w/ commodus and maximus seems to be streching it. Maximus is not a god. I mean, what human being could talk decently with the person who killed his son? And the way Maximus almost offers him salvation, and the stuff about how Marcus Aurelius loved Commodus, yuk! I can never imagine Maximus saying that. Anyway, as always Robin I love your plotlines and your great stories, but the ending to this one rang false.
Gabe Kaiser 2001-10-18 ch 6, anon.	abuseI enjoyed this story very much. So much that I came close to crying at the end. Well done!
Angie 2001-10-09 ch 6, anon.	abuseHi Robin! God I love this story soooo much but why did you have to kill Julius? :-( Youre making me cry in the library at Uni (LOL) Hurry up and write the next part, I cant wait to see what Maximus does to Commodus...I'll write to you again soon, but like you I suffer from a chronic lack of a life syndrome ever since I started equine college! Glad you like part 3 of Shaddows and Dust, part 4 is in progress but probably wont be posted for ages, Im burried under work here, lol
Akizuki 2001-09-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseWhat a great story! I really enjoy reading this fanfic. Iam not really great with feedback, but I enjoyed the flow and the writing style of your work. I haven't seen this topic really been done, so Iam glad to see it being so well written. Great job and I hope you write much more in the future! Akizuki
Marxbros 2001-08-31 ch 5,	abuseRobin, please finish the story! Gotta know what happens to julius.

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