so cute lol gourry is still the chivalrous one I adore despite being a jellybrain ^^ lol so cute. I liked that alot!

~LDA

*sigh* I know everyones already said this, but it was too short! I thought it was cute though. I can imagine kinda imagine this as the sort of thing Gourry might be thinking. From what I can see, you're a good writer, it wouldn't hurt to try and expand this!

Short, very very short, but a good place to start if you wanted to expand on it.

The idea was so cute, but it was way too short.

-Ahria

Sunny: wel...its ok I guess

Maliska: to bad it is such a small fic