This is a pretty good look at Jake and his parental relationship during the war. I found it very good. :)

Wow...those last two lines were so hard-hitting. The whole thing was so simple and dry and resigned...it's like you jumped inside Jake's head. That's one of the most simple yet astute things I've ever read. *bows*

Wow. *points* Brilliant author! ^_^

perfecto.

Well done, I liked it. Really have no constructive critisism for you. You don't need it. (shrug)

Good, quick, read.

Your Author in Crime,
--EARLY

Wow. Very dark and good description of what's going on in Jakes head.