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Loreto W
2007-08-10
ch 1,
abuseT__T This story make me cry T_T Is so nice T__T snif BUA T__T Hi!! n__n I'm Loreto and I don't speak english u_u but I can understand very well english my problem is grammar ^^! But this is the second time that I read this fan fic. The first time was when I saw it in Zolu yahoo group so I decide read it again, and then I came here so this reviews is for you n_n You are a great Zolu nice fan fics Writer n_n This was very nice, you m you take? character personality very well! I want mean, you capture? I don't know if that was correct, but you CATCH! yes! you catch very well the characters personality n_n SO CONGRATULATIONS! This story is going to my favorites and you too
The Pixess
2007-06-08
ch 1,
abuse*giggle snort* so don't even know what this is, other than Japaneze, but it was PRICELESS. And may I be the zillioneth person to state how RAD the 2...some times 3 line was?? (Yes, I said rad. It was so good I had to use outdated slang to articulate it's awesomeness.)

love ya,

Pixie (some people nicknamed me that)
Fishheads
2006-10-06
ch 1,
abuseI dont HAVE any sanity left.
Solo Loco Ellingson-Rose
2006-09-26
ch 1,
abuse*gags at pairing* Why did I EVEN read that?! Eurgh...
It made me snicker though. G-g-g-g-g-good...w-work...Tigress.
Some Girl101
2006-08-15
ch 1,
abuseI want some virtual cheese! So, here is the review:
Great fic. it made me laugh. :)
My favorite part was at the end when Luffy is like:
'“Well, thanks for explaining sex to me, Zoro! See you later!” With that, he trotted merrily off.'
Great job!
akari-hayashi
2006-05-06
ch 1,
abuseNya~ This is cute! And it's so them! But if I were Zoro, I would have pounced on Luffy that instant! XD
Kikyo's killer
2006-04-18
ch 1,
abuseAW! That's so cute!
calikocat
2006-04-11
ch 1,
abuseMust Fave! ^o^ I 'bout died laughing! XD
Lamia angel of death
2006-04-05
ch 1,
abuseO.O woah...
Chibi-Chichan
2006-03-24
ch 1,
abuseThis was SO funny! XD
Kazune
2006-03-23
ch 1,
abuseyay!! i love it!! >.
Ahja Reyn
2006-03-21
ch 1,
abuseSex is when...2 people...well, sometimes 3...or more...Um...

LMAO! I made the mistake to take a drink right when I was reading that. Omg, that's hilarious!!

But overall, good job!!
geko-blackjack
2006-03-21
ch 1,
abuseOh boy, virtual cheese!

Awesome fic! Luffy's 'confession' was absolutely adorable with how casually it was thrown into the conversation.

"Um...well, you see...Sex is when...2 people...well, sometimes 3...or more...Um...” Hee! Priceless line!

Nice work!
lover's-death
2006-03-21
ch 1,
abuseteehee i love it! aw luffy is so innocent... Continue now dammit!...please :D cause this is very introsting
Irish Whirlwind
2006-03-20
ch 1,
abuseCute! poor Zoro, great job!
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