aww snap dis ** was hard hurry up and come out with the sequel and make that just as long damn I can't belevie i finished cause i started when you were on ur last chapter so it took me forever but it was worth it

Brilliant story, bit of everything and awesome action, though to many new characters introduced quickly got slightly confusing

This has always been one of my favourite Naruto stories. The only things that irked me really was the OC's, being honest. Big example was Naruto's wife. She had such a minor role.. I barely even recognised she was there, except for the couple times she popped up.. Lol.

Also was a bit iffy about the OC as the big baddy.. He just didn't give me the badass aura I get from canon villains like Pein, or Itachi. It was still an excellent story. Well written, lovely dialog and interaction. Tbh, the main issue for me was the OC's, and that could be personal opinion.

I must also admit though, Naruto himself confused the hell out of me.. Hes meant to be this bad ** nukenin, yet hes totally and utterly out of his league against Aisu, until he gets some random God!Mode powerup, which just screamed Bleach! At me. He also got pretty much reduced to a no-one halfway through the story.. Slapped around by Aisu, shown hes weak by Senzairu.. Yeah, irked me a bit.

After all those years of training, he still had to go through a random 2 month training period which magically put him on their level, even though 6 years couldn't enable him to match them? Seemed very unrealistic, was something I'd expect off Bleach or Dragonball Z if I'm being brutally honest. Don't get me wrong, this rant might seem negative, but its mainly personal opinion, and the story itself is still excellent. Ja Ne!

just finished the story ... in 5 days
awsome.
what attracted me the most is naruto's devotion and determination
and after reading this, i got this w3arm and fizzying feeling
it is just great! :)
props to you!! :D

Just a few words.

This fic is awesome.

~thegreatdar

Sawado Gidou started to raise a valid point, one which SHikamaru atleast would have seen and commented on. NAruto is not a Leaf-nin, infact he has been very vocal about his lack of loyalty to Konoha, and they are about to put the safty of thier village leader in his hands. For all they know he could be a Cloud spy, who has been waiting for this summit to be called, so he cpould assist in Tsunade's Assassination. He has already proved to be strong enough to defeat her succsessor, so his assitance could all be an elaborate ruse to launh a coup against the leaf. Also Gidou did not question his skills, only his trustworthyness.

What an amazing story. truly unique, powerful and pretty much perfect. There were no loose ends, the ending is really good, the writing is pretty average with some repetitions but the plot is excellent.

Thanks you so much for writing this, it has been amazing reading it.

i love you

story is REALLY good to say the least. first few chapters made got me hooked. really like the way you balance the characters... am in the 12th chapter right now and cant wait to read more! till next review!

I love this story. But you need to get a thausarus, I found in your writing that you tend to over-use words.

Very good story. I suggest some cleaning up in certain areas though.

Well I did like the story, until this line "Sasuke's eyes narrowed at that statement. Naruto calling Sasuke-chan was one thing, but saying that he was a ** boy was over the line."

I just want you to know, if you are willing to do the world a favor. Tell me your P.O. box, ill personally tie you a noose and send it to you =)Having your seed removed from the earth would be a great benefit to mankind.

Fantastic run. Fantastic.

Absolutely, ** brilliant.

I don't really know how else to say it..

you kick so much **, that there isn't enough ** left over for other **-kickers to kick.

^^

Major kudos to you.

One Word: Amazing.

So flawlessly done, excellent work.

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Mm, I've never been overly fond of Main/Strong OC characters. If they were strong but passing, I can understand that, but eh... The story is great, and I'm gonna have to say that you're gonna have to accept Negative feedback, it's not a bad thing, it simply means people don't like certain points.

Yami is a slight issue with me simply because it would have been easier to have him without a lover. She hasn't, in my point of view, contributed much to the story except making Naruto off-limits. Tsunade's son is also a bit strange... I really hope you aren't about to break of the Kurenai/Asuma Canon pairing... Can't stop ya if you do, but it's kind of silly. Not to mention Kurenai is, by far, the youngest Pre-Shippuden Jonin. Gai would be, in my estimate, the same age as Kakashi. After all, he is Kakashi's 'Eternal Rival.'

Kurenai being the youngest also means her and Asuma couldn't have been on the same Genin cell. Asuma's actually, I think, the oldest Jonin.

In anycase, those faults aside, this is a very well thought out story. Slightly less descriptive than some of my favorites, namely 'Shinobi Wars' and 'Time and Again.'

Bah, sorry, been reading a lot of stories by those authors lately, it's not fair to compare.

Point is, this is a very good story, aside from my own personal opinions, it's one of the best.