|Reviews for Those Eyes|
| moopad 3/6/09 . chapter 12
it's awesome and kyu/kawao/natuoxsasuke is THE smexy pair
shame that it's unfinished tho
just whenever u feel like u wanna continue, we are waiting
| menolly1019 6/29/07 . chapter 12
Hello, crazy person has arrived.
The eye-changing thing is so cool! I love it. The bright blue sticks out so much and is so heartbreaking. It doesn't look like Naruto will ever truly be himself again. His eyes will never stay blue forever.
I don't think you did Naruto's friends justice when they realized that he was alive. Wouldn't the Godaime have some sort of personal feelings about him being alive and well after having lost him? The reunions didn't even have any elements of surprise. Everyone just automatically knew or had figured it out by the time they saw him.
It's an interesting concept that Naruto has to incorporate Kuwao into himself. I think it's realistic that his new personality wouldn't just disappear right after he remembered who he originally was.
The Sakura being on her period explanation was hilarious. And so true to. It's not like you have much control over anything at that point.
I'm going to go now. Happy Writing.
| Satele 2/11/07 . chapter 12
This is interesting thus far! Please, please do continue! I like it very much!
| Lizzy15 1/18/07 . chapter 12
I really like this fanfic so please in the name of all that is good please write more chapters!
| Animejo 12/31/06 . chapter 12
Wow! Your seme!Naruto is too cool for words. And Sasuke has a girlfriend? How'd his fangirls react?
I particularly like the scene when Kyuubi comes to defend Sasuke from the invaders-though you short of left out WHY Konoho was being invaded and by WHO. Still, the image of a demon twining around Sasuke like a giant cat (with 9 tails) is super-neat and cute, 'cause it features possessive!Naruto.
Is this abandoned? You haven't updated for 8 months!
But I still look forward to what happens next (aka how Kawao/Naruto/Kyuubi gets THOSE EYES)!
| tristan 11/16/06 . chapter 1
dont get me wrong, i like this storey, thers just some things i hope youl be careful with
i dont know much about these things since im not female, but maybe u shoudnt be stereotiping girls periods and saying that one of the main caracters hates most women when the most of yor readers are probly women 8D. plus it dont add any depth to the story or caractrs
and be careful becus some parts in the story doesn't flow becus it has 'mood swings'. in some parts it makes cense cause of the difrences between kawao and naruto, but in other places it doesnt like for exampl the stereotiping sakura part again, becus stereotiping is humorus but that chapter is serious. it knocks it off balanse or somtheng. each chapter just have a different feel to it, dont flow.
u seem like a matur writer so i assuming yor one of those ones that likes tips to get even better at it. so yeah, thats my too cents, dont know how useful they are tho haha. ill be waching this story, its awsome. ecxuse my bad writing
| synthetica2006 at hotmail 11/15/06 . chapter 12
You're a really good writer (especially in comparison to the average Naruto fanfiction...). The story is interesting and engaging and really fun to read.
Anyway, I should also mention that I found several parts in the story too over-romaticized. A story can still evoke emotions without having to use that quality in abundance.
But yeah, please continue this story, because I adore it! Looking forward to the next chapters
| hearmei 11/5/06 . chapter 12
you haven't updated this story in ages! *pout* I really love where it's going and I can't wait 'til naruto gets really pissed off at sasuke's girlfriend! abject humiliation anyone? hehe :p
| DarkRavie 9/22/06 . chapter 12
Your story is really good. I do hope you haven't decided to finish it, because it would be a shame not to, I really like it.
| VeiledLantern 8/25/06 . chapter 12
why oh why have i found this fic just NOW?
the story is yeah, cool and hot especially the thing betwen naruto and sasuke. i normally hate amnesia!fics but this one proved to be different from the other cliched fics out there and the elements were combined in the fic to agree with each other. ii ne.
| DemonRogue 8/7/06 . chapter 12
The story is fantastic! I love Naruto's character so much.
| takuya 7/16/06 . chapter 12
WOW THIS STORY ROCKS i so love it i cant get enought its so good i really want more a reall internet page turner plz updat eit soon
| Michiru 7/6/06 . chapter 11
-review continued from the review of chapter 12-
Sorry, I accidently clicked the 'submit review' button, shame on me. ;;.
It seems that you haven't updated for a quite long time, and that's understandable, since people do have writers block, things in RL to handle, laziness, etc etc. But I do hope you'll continue and finish this fic, it'll be a shame if you don't, this fic is really good! I'm sure other people would say the same.
That's all I guess, I'll be reading when you post the next chapter! :).
| Michiru 7/6/06 . chapter 12
Hey there! I've just found your fic and immidiately read all of it from the first chapter to chapter 12, and am actually surprised that you haven't had a bazillion reviews... yet.
Your fic is really entertaining, and I find the whole deal of Naruto-Kyuubi-Kawao really interesting, I haven't read something like that before. And although Sasuke may seem OOC at times (y'know, being like really submissive and a bit emotional maybe?) I feel like at the same time he's still being in character. Good job!
It seems that
| TwlightMystery 6/5/06 . chapter 12
This story is awsome when are you gonna update though? and I have a question...what the hell is a "beta" reader? I wanna volunteer but I have no I kinda need to know what it is they do first ) I'll wait on your reply k?