pls pls update i know its been a few years but i like to see what happens (even though i know lol)

Will you update the story. You are absoutely amazing as a writer. It is accurate and you put a comedy to it. Not dark humour like the Mortal Kombat norm. I like both types of humour.

I love it! There are hardly any errors. The story makes sense, a LOT of sense out of Mortal Kombat 3's story. I love how you're sticking to MK3/UMK3, too, since after that the story got so weird. . .

I'm afraid that you're not updating because it's been a while. I hope that you haven't lost interest in this story because it's great. After reading chapter 6, I was like "No! No! I need more!". Much better than MK:Annihilation. ;)

Good story and please include more Scorpion. Update Soon!

Excellent job so far! Keep it up!

I love your Mortal Kombat universe. Its both well thought out and well written. And may i point out you have done an especially excellent job with Scorpion,really delving into his given motivations. Cant wait to get to MK Deception where Scorpion is th hero.

Great update, I love your Mortal Kombat stories.

Awesome story. The interaction between Shao Kahn and Shang Tsung is hilarious. And not to sound like a rabid fangirl but... ohmygod more Scorpion!

please hurry up with next chapter, i want to read about scorpion saving sub-zero from danger and joining the earthrealm warriors

That was terrific! Such masterful story telling, makes me feel like I'm reading an novel adaption of the Mortal Kombat 3 series!

Yes! An update - I liked this quote:

“Who is “Johnny Cage”?” Kahn asked, slightly confused.

“He’s the one who wears those sunglasses.” Tsung answered for him.

“Oh yes. The stupid one.”

Anyway - waiting for more, cheers!

Nice job, keep up the good work.

Great chapter so far. Glad to see you updating

Hi. Just wanted to stop by and say that I really enjoyed your story and can't wait for a future update :)
For once it's good to see a story written pretty skilfully and thankfully without much dramatisation...so anyway, this is going to go into my favs. so I can read chapter 2 and 3 later on, because I have to go and hit the books (quite literally in fact).
Waiting for further updates~

This story continues to bring the MK3 series to life. It's awesome. Oh and does Scorpion make any more appearances?