I love it! What an amazing plot line. Another daughter. Wow. :) Please continue!!

Hi,
I really like this story.

Don't get discouraged by the flames, it happens to the best of us. (Not that is should...) I like the idea, but you might want to seperate different days, and take everything slower. And make it more realistic, I mean who would just say "Goodnight" after she finds out she has a sister?!?! Oh yea, add more emotion.

I loved it please update soon.

That was an interesting little twist. I like this so far. Keep going. I'm enjoying this. But, Daphne and Libby should go with Henry and Ian to meet Harper

This is great please continue it.

i like

Well...it's certainly creative...

its happening all to quickly mabe slow it down a bit it would make it more interesting

Ug, I can't stand it.

Scenario:
Libby:"Oh, honey, guess what!?! I just happened to sleep with you in time to have Daphne and, ah, what the hell? I magically had a daughter before that to! I know, I know, I should have told Daph, you know? But LOL that would be to in character! OH! By the way, hehe, she lives here now, instead of in NY where my parents never contacted me to inform me my daughter lived in England now, and, oh yeah, your first daughter never actually wanted to find you, she just happened to come here, and Ian, well, he wouldn't notice that last name and tell Daphne about it, no sir ee."
Henry: "Oh dear, that is a pickle."
Daphne: "I have a sister? Oh well, I'm to ditzy to care much, I'm going to skip off to my room now and complain to Ian, who is to stupid to realize his mate's gf has the same last name as my daddy!"
Ian: "...I know her!"

I'm sorry, that was cruel, but this was awful.

it got my attention.
write some more!

this is a really good story... keep it up please..

O.K. so far, and has potential. Try to somehow seperate different days

This is terrible. Not the writing, but the whole premise.

You need to use paragraphs and properly separate segments.

This idea is ridiculous.

Well i like what a girl wants.. .so i want MORE! really good but countinue it!