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| Reviews for The First Daughter |
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   roganjalex 4/23/13 . chapter 1awesome update pls |
| brokenvoice14 4/27/11 . chapter 1 love to read what happens next it would be cool to see ian fall for harper...that would be interesting or see harper fall for ian... |
| michaelflynn'sgirl 12/23/10 . chapter 1 How come you never finished it It was a wonderful start, would of liked to be able to read more. |
| NerdLifeIsAGreatLife 7/20/09 . chapter 1 OMG! |
| ariadne.masen 12/6/08 . chapter 1 I always wanted to read a story about henry having another secret daughter! Great. Alothough you wrote this a long time ago. Plaese continue! Please. |
| Poemwriter98 8/6/08 . chapter 1 I love it! What an amazing plot line. Another daughter. Wow. :) Please continue! |
| Sweet 15 4/14/08 . chapter 1 Hi, I really like this story. |
| oheygracey 12/29/07 . chapter 1 Don't get discouraged by the flames, it happens to the best of us. (Not that is should...) I like the idea, but you might want to seperate different days, and take everything slower. And make it more realistic, I mean who would just say "Goodnight" after she finds out she has a sister? Oh yea, add more emotion. |
| Gabriella Janeway 10/7/07 . chapter 1 I loved it please update soon. |
| LOTRlover1066 6/8/07 . chapter 1 That was an interesting little twist. I like this so far. Keep going. I'm enjoying this. But, Daphne and Libby should go with Henry and Ian to meet Harper |
| The Sway Wannabe 4/2/07 . chapter 1 This is great please continue it. |
| Christine Writer 3/17/07 . chapter 1 i like |
| rhapsodyflower 2/3/07 . chapter 1 Well...it's certainly creative... |
| julzxoxo 1/24/07 . chapter 1 its happening all to quickly mabe slow it down a bit it would make it more interesting |
| abandonedaccount13 1/21/07 . chapter 1 Ug, I can't stand it. Scenario: Libby:"Oh, honey, guess what! I just happened to sleep with you in time to have Daphne and, ah, what the hell? I magically had a daughter before that to! I know, I know, I should have told Daph, you know? But LOL that would be to in character! OH! By the way, hehe, she lives here now, instead of in NY where my parents never contacted me to inform me my daughter lived in England now, and, oh yeah, your first daughter never actually wanted to find you, she just happened to come here, and Ian, well, he wouldn't notice that last name and tell Daphne about it, no sir ee." Henry: "Oh dear, that is a pickle." Daphne: "I have a sister? Oh well, I'm to ditzy to care much, I'm going to skip off to my room now and complain to Ian, who is to stupid to realize his mate's gf has the same last name as my daddy!" Ian: "...I know her!" I'm sorry, that was cruel, but this was awful. |
