you stired some very intense emotions here, but I'm sure you know that all right this was totally brilliant!

wa! So sad! But i think he couldn't have gone any other way...but still...sniff...;_;

Very touching. It's nice to see a fic for once that doesn't mishandle the whole Zidane/Dagger scenario like a goofy situation that needs to be made fun of. Also well written.

*sniff* That was so sad...I always thought Zidane and Garnet were cute together! But the truth is, what Garland said to Kuja could have easily applied to him. Interesting how that came to your mind...

...*sniff*...okay...good...sad...need to go..read...happy stories now...*sniff*

terribly sad, but life is, sometimes. a very fascinating possibility, zidane dying of old age before garnet, and it makes much sense. you're truly talented! i love this story. i didn't think the ending was sappy at all, just wistful. and i hope to see more from you.

*biting bottom lip in an attempt not to cry* that was so SAD! Omigod, it even made ME want to cry, and I never cry...AUGH! NO! IwillnotcryIwillnotcry...

Oh.. how sad.. I really liked the way you used the heartbeat for some reason. How it slowed down and all. Bravo.

yeah just a little sad, of course i haven't beaten the game yet, so you spoiled a little of the ending

I agree; this one had a much better ending. I have to admit, your best line (by far) had me in stitches, perhaps unintentionally: ". . . well, the evening got a lot less productive and a lot more enjoyable." Absolutely hysterical. Excellent work! Please email if you're so inclined.

Why... must people make so good goddamned stories where you cry? *cries* Good...*snif* anyways. I'll ready your other ones.

Its beutiful and yet,, so sad. It realy makes you think.

Very good story. You could have described the characters' emotions a *little* more (like Steiner, though Zidane and Dagger were wonderfully done), but it was still a great fic. I also thought, too, that the Genomes were short-lasting, but I always thought it was just me. *shrug* I'm not alone! Ha! Again... good fic! _

GOOD! Someone ELSE realized that fact! Well, it was a sad fic, of course. Fantastically written, just like Terra's Flight of Fancy. I love your fics, and can't wait for your next project!

NOOOOOO! ZIDANE DIED OF A GENOME HEART ATTACK? THAT'S IT? *sob* and... i thought it would take more to kill him off... *sniff* You've just written a beautiful story... I though this would be a chapter story... but guess it's not. However, you can turn it into one... _ *puppyeyes* PWEEEEASE?