This is interesting, please continue this story as grabbed me in and I would like to know how it ends...

Your doing good. I like this and cant wait for the next chapter

Bravo bravo... Bravicimo... that was a wonderful chapter... I must read more than work on the one I started... I must say though, your story line is briliant: Making Ai to where he can access the para-dream nightly. I never would have thought of that. I'll comment again after I read the next chapter. I'll leave my new fanfic name so you can look out for mine... you'll probably like it. Bravo Again!
Jay

Nice story you have going, keep it up.

Nice start. It goes well with the actual series. Keep up the good work.