aw luv it!

heh, that was funny!upadate? :D keep it up!!

This was funny! Especially in the beginning!

OMG! CONTINUE!

cool i love this,pai and lettuce action i've never read a fic with them in befroe so,.. update soon fnx

lol. ichigo shoulda just left kish there.

YAY!!(this time it is nessesary) TartXPudding 4 eva!!^^ this story is great by the way!


yay!


~ILiketospin~

YAY!! this is a really good story so far!!(by the way I just Like to say yay even when it isn't nessary^^)YAY!!

~ILiketospin~

this otta be good the mews and the aliens on vacaition...

Oh my... Ichigo is evil XD

“HUMAN GERMS!” With that, Tart is gone.

Kish hugs her. “Is that necessary?”

“Yes, it is extremely necessary,” Kish answers. He can’t help it since they’re not fighting each other.

Kishu you rock! I love the thought of Taruto clawing at the ground as Pudding merrily drags him every where. Well, at least Ichigo's not evil enough to drop a crab in Kishu's pants */shudders/* I love this fic, please update!

You are da BOMB dudes!

Ch2: Truce

That night, after the invitation to the beach, the aliens go to a local store to find clothing. When they get there, Kish gets out his dragon swords and blasts the camera.

“Was that necessary?” Pai asks.

“Yeah, it was completely necessary.”

“Dude…. There’s like, so many sections of clothing…” Tart says in awe.

“Yes, there’s infants, toddlers, boys, girls, teens, men, and women.” Pai says, for some reason having the need to list every section.

“Let’s start stealing!” Kish says happily

Suddenly, the door bursts open. The Mew Mews walk in half asleep. It’s two in the morning after all. “For the uhh…. something… nya!” Ichigo tries to say the battle cry but messes up due to tiredness.

“That was weird, na no da!” Pudding says.

“Who cares? Let’s go back to sleep,” Mint says. Lettuce sighs in relief as they leave.

this was one of the funniest chapters!! XD oh my god I'm dieing!

You two... ROCK! This is teh funniest damn story I've read in awhile.. well despite the part in another one where Pai hits a lady when he's driving and Kishu calls her a cazy lady, that was the BOMB! But this rocks so much too! My favorite parts are:

Tart gulps and then drinks the potion. Suddenly he falls to the ground in choking agony. Kish gasps, “YOU KILLED HIM, PAI!”

“I didn’t mean to! Maybe the potion is too strong for kids twelve and under!”

XD!

“I’m not being your guinea pig! Make Tart test it,” Kish says. He didn’t want to end up growing two heads or something. Even if Pai was good with such things as genetics and chemistry and such, he didn’t trust the potion.

Apparently Tart was thinking the same thing, “No, you test it! I’m just a kid! I’m too young to die!”

“Exactly! No one will notice if you’re gone. Besides, the youngest always goes first,” Kish says triumphantly.

“THAT’S ONLY IN BOARD GAMES!” Tart exclaims.

“Just pretend this is a board game.”

XD!! He's so mean *dies of laughter*

HAHA! Man I just love ALL these couples ^-^ Keepup the good work!

that was funny.

I love it! I hope you update though, cause this story is really aweseum and it would be a pity to leave it unfinished.