HOLY SHIT I DIDN'T THINK THE DEATH WOULD BE THAT GORY!

once I read:

"Otou-san?"

"hmm?"

"Why does the innocent die?"

Oh my gosh you almost had me crying I'm so serious And just answer this one question "Why does the innocent die?"

Wow. . . that was really short. AND SAD! I don't really understand the Naruto storyline and I don't read or watch it but this was so touching! Um. . .Af? . . .PLEASE DON'T KILL ME!

ha! that's really good..but still..hinata had to die? wha!

It so short and yet so touching. You made me cry... a little. But I'm okay now. So... um... Why DOES the innocent die?

I seriously hope that doesn't actually hapeen in the Anime but if it does I hope Hiashi gets a royal beating and then death for cursing his daughter like that.

That hurts! Tragically beautiful.

so sad i almost cried...thatb was so beautiful. you're a talented writer