please continue this! I really want to know what happens!

I love it! darn! i shouldn't have read it until it is complete!! please please please add on QUICKLY!

M. Very good. Very dark. Very much longer than one chapter. :)

~Pen~

More!! plz write more1 this is great.

Awesome fic :3 Keep up the good work, and update soon please :D

As always, a realistic and sort of sad, yet well-written piece produced. Well done! Still, I marvel over your amazing ability to portray emotions really well and I actually particularly liked chapter two because it gave an insight to how Kiba was feeling... and poor him. Oh well. A very good idea to write the story in Naruto AND Kiba's point of view because then we get a look at the situation from differnt points of view. Yes, I like this story. Update soon!

As you are a good writer, you therefore write good stories. This, if I am correct, is your first 'series' - it's nice, somewhat subtle in its rather morbid feel, but more importantly is rather quiet. Nothing really happens, it's not like Kiba gets up and crashes through a wall before getting raped and then, I dunno where I'm going with this, but you know what I mean. Practically next to no real drama, only clips and bits and a general theme. That's what I like about your pieces; they aren't over the top. They're subtle, what might be even called true. Not many stories are written in a believable manner, but I think you really hit it right on in that aspect.

First Chapter: 7/10, Second Chapter: 6/10, Third Chapter: 7/10, Fourth Chapter: 8/10. I really like when Naruto and Kiba interact in your plots, so chapter four was really my favorite. Keep writing, go, go, go!

cewl fic!! :) update soom please!!

Very good. I feel so sorry for Kiba. (sorry for the short review.)

yay! more chapters! this is your first non0oneshot huh? freaken sweet. keep updating i wanna see what happens!

so sad! update update update! i lurve it. it's interesting, especially kiba's train of thought.

so sad! i feel terrible for all of them! i'm dying to see what happens next! great chapter !1

wow. I believe this is your first non-oneshot. cool.

poor, poor Kiba. he's in a state of denial I guess. who would kill a pregnant woman and two boys?! i support Kiba for seeking vengence.

continue your writing or i'll track you down and stalk you.

For some reason I love the lines "married young—real young" don't know why though...oh well!

I don't think I told you to keep writing in my last review so...

Keep it up!

I see this going somewhere. i hope you continue it.