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| TotallyObsessive 2008-03-01 ch 4,  | abuseplease continue this! I really want to know what happens! |
| Pudapoo 2007-08-07 ch 4, | abuseI love it! darn! i shouldn't have read it until it is complete!! please please please add on QUICKLY! |
| The Flying Pen 2006-12-13 ch 4, | abuseM. Very good. Very dark. Very much longer than one chapter. :) ~Pen~ |
| AnataWA 2006-05-23 ch 4, anon. | abuseMore!! plz write more1 this is great. |
| blittzz 2006-04-16 ch 4, | abuseAwesome fic :3 Keep up the good work, and update soon please :D |
| Somebody-unknown 2006-03-30 ch 4, | abuseAs always, a realistic and sort of sad, yet well-written piece produced. Well done! Still, I marvel over your amazing ability to portray emotions really well and I actually particularly liked chapter two because it gave an insight to how Kiba was feeling... and poor him. Oh well. A very good idea to write the story in Naruto AND Kiba's point of view because then we get a look at the situation from differnt points of view. Yes, I like this story. Update soon! |
| Dextral 2006-03-29 ch 4, | abuseAs you are a good writer, you therefore write good stories. This, if I am correct, is your first 'series' - it's nice, somewhat subtle in its rather morbid feel, but more importantly is rather quiet. Nothing really happens, it's not like Kiba gets up and crashes through a wall before getting raped and then, I dunno where I'm going with this, but you know what I mean. Practically next to no real drama, only clips and bits and a general theme. That's what I like about your pieces; they aren't over the top. They're subtle, what might be even called true. Not many stories are written in a believable manner, but I think you really hit it right on in that aspect. First Chapter: 7/10, Second Chapter: 6/10, Third Chapter: 7/10, Fourth Chapter: 8/10. I really like when Naruto and Kiba interact in your plots, so chapter four was really my favorite. Keep writing, go, go, go! |
| Lithium-Flower567 2006-03-28 ch 4, | abusecewl fic!! :) update soom please!! |
| Achillea 2006-03-28 ch 4, | abuseVery good. I feel so sorry for Kiba. (sorry for the short review.) |
| Sykoe AnimeCrasherz 2006-03-23 ch 3, | abuseyay! more chapters! this is your first non0oneshot huh? freaken sweet. keep updating i wanna see what happens! |
| Sykoe AnimeCrasherz 2006-03-20 ch 2, | abuseso sad! update update update! i lurve it. it's interesting, especially kiba's train of thought. |
| Sykoe AnimeCrasherz 2006-03-20 ch 1, | abuseso sad! i feel terrible for all of them! i'm dying to see what happens next! great chapter !1 |
| Pi-chi 2006-03-20 ch 2, anon. | abusewow. I believe this is your first non-oneshot. cool. poor, poor Kiba. he's in a state of denial I guess. who would kill a pregnant woman and two boys?! i support Kiba for seeking vengence. continue your writing or i'll track you down and stalk you. |
| Pi-chi 2006-03-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseFor some reason I love the lines "married young—real young" don't know why though...oh well! I don't think I told you to keep writing in my last review so... Keep it up! |
| hey 2006-03-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI see this going somewhere. i hope you continue it. |