All I can say is that the next part BETTER be coming up soon. Very soon. I really like how you portray Matt, and how thoughtful he seems. And the Joe/Matt interaction is just so exquisitely done. Great work!

Whee! *bounces around like a maniac* I still love how you wrote this! I love how Joe's observant, and I love how Matt struggled with the leadership role. I just thought that both were very realistic descriptions for those two and I thought it fit in excellently with their characters. Geeee! *bounces around some more* I love the titles too! They both fit really well! And...More! More! More! Please? *puppy eyes* Excellent first part! -

I like this story alot -