lovely!


HawkAngel

Excellent.

This is just about perfect. I am so glad you've chosen to inhabit the P&P 2005 movie verse as Matthew Macfadyen Darcys are as hard to come by as hen's teeth. And I do so love the movie. I can't get over how perfect your grammar and how very period your turn of phrasing is. i just hope you would write more and maybe venture to longer pieces. There are just a few kinks in this story though (you may not agree with me). I've always presumed Darcy's father's name is George because his daughter's name is Georgiana and his godchild who is probably named after him is called George.

oh! are they alive? or were they just visiting as "ghosts" i think i get it! aww...that was soo sweet the lizzy/darcy part! i'm glad his parents approve!

I like it! banter every bit as enjoyable as darcy and lizzie

Oh, how very lovely! I would have never thought of Lady Anne's point of view on the situation...Very good indeed!!

Great one shot! I like how it was written. You did a great job.

That was a cool way to portray the story, through Lady Anne and Henry's observances. Very unique, I liked it!