Nicely written story. You captured Jack pretty well.

Great job!

Well... thought I'd stop by to say I like your writing and that you should continue.

This also was a wonderful story, I like how you managed to capture Jack's feelings throughout his lifetime with and without Irina/Laura.

"beloved sister" ? Honestly, Irina is too forgiving ! I imagine Jack and Irina on a private island drinking coloured drinks as well, this would be a perfect ending for them ! They need to get a life that doesn't revolve around protecting Sydney and Nadia. This was really great,and very in character! Keep up the good work !